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comment What to do about noun clusters
Actually I appreciate your revision more for its usage of verbs ("Using the", "Doing a", "Attempting to") than for the parentheticals. Including parentheticals, though, does improve things.
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comment What to do about noun clusters
Quotes do help distinguish separation of the nouns, but I believe it still requires too much expertise to understand that "X doesn't print."
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comment What to do about noun clusters
I should add, to be fair, the capitalization is loose. It has unofficially become parlance granting it the usage of such caps. And seriously this took me a few minutes to parse and I know the terms.
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