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Sep
4
comment Critque on how this sits as a prologue
This is good. Maybe the second last pharagrph about the snow can be shortened/be made a bit more direct? The analogy of the beautiful women was lost on me, but that is my problem I think. yes it does make me want to read on...I am hoping this 22 year old would not die so easily :)
Aug
26
comment Does this urge you to read further or stop?
Yes it does make me want to read further and figure out more about being 'compatible'. Good stuff
Feb
27
comment How to make a letter interesting?
Fantastico! This was what I was looking for
Feb
10
comment How does a code monkey become a novelist?
That is a great analogy
Jan
31
comment Byronic Hero characters
Thank you! I thought struggling with integiry meant struggling in a loser kind of way. I understand your point now
Jan
31
comment Urban erotica and authors
Thank you very much! I am not sure if I fully know what urban erotica means...but what I meant was a story between lets say..a wall street shark and a lonely artist. Or maybe the relationship between carrie bradshaw and Alexander petrovsky...taken further into the erotic realm(Please forgive cheesiness)
Jan
30
comment Byronic Hero characters
Thanks. One of the items on the list is :struggling with integrity. Is not that a sign of weakness for a man? Or the explanation you gave holds for this one too?
Jan
30
comment Byronic Hero characters
Thanks. Although it seems the average woman responds more to the sweet talker than to the bitter one. No?
Jan
30
comment How does a code monkey become a novelist?
Those are value filled tips Jon. Thanks. But as a programmer, how do you 'b) adopt a lifestyle and routine that lends itself to creativity.'?
Jan
30
comment How does a code monkey become a novelist?
Thanks.'At the high levels of the hacker ranks, I've found many polymaths.' Can you name a few names? I suppose you are referring to modern day figures only...