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The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter — it's the difference between a lightning bug and the lightning. — Mark Twain

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Jan
28
revised Is there a way of listing the elements that makes a real fact fun?
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Jan
27
comment How can I revise these sentences to be more correct while still keeping the effect?
I'd use the M-dash too, although I don't know if "because of" needs to be emphasized so much. I'd have to see the lines in context.
Jan
25
revised How can I edit my own, very old work?
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Jan
25
comment How can I edit my own, very old work?
Your color-coding sounds fascinating. Can you explain that a bit more? How do you get into the rhythm of the text with the colors splashed everywhere? And what is "the relationship character," the love interest?
Jan
25
answered How can I edit my own, very old work?
Jan
25
revised How can I edit my own, very old work?
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Jan
25
reviewed Approve suggested edit on Is it frustrating not to know the narrator's gender?
Jan
24
answered Confusing writing in order to show how character is falling asleep - is it OK?
Jan
23
comment Where to publish poems
Welcome to WritersSE! The poster has already stated s/he does not wish to open a Facebook account, and no, s/he can't "publish" poetry here. Posting it for critique is not publication. Please read the FAQ to get a better sense of what kind of content is allowed here. writers.stackexchange.com/faq
Jan
22
comment Where to publish poems
What do you mean by "publish"? Could you post them on your own blog?
Jan
22
revised How would a source be referenced in the typical paper/book?
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Jan
21
comment Can anyone direct me to writers' resources on AI or robotic ethics?
You might also ask over at scifi.stackexchange.com
Jan
21
revised A tricky sentence to construct
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Jan
21
reviewed Approve suggested edit on How does one deal with world builder's syndrome?
Jan
20
comment Software for instructional book
Why would Scrivener not work for you? What needs do you have that it doesn't seem to fill?
Jan
19
revised How does one present spoken dialogue as a secondary language to signed speech?
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Jan
19
comment How does one present spoken dialogue as a secondary language to signed speech?
Ooh, you're right! I had forgotten that. Clearly I need to read more comics. :)
Jan
19
revised How to write about things which depend on each other
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Jan
19
revised What is the difference between writing in the first and the third person?
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Jan
19
revised Proof reading service
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