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The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter — it's the difference between a lightning bug and the lightning. — Mark Twain

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Jan
24
comment How to tell a story with the least amount of writing?
@Aerovistae Yes, I'm sure the Simpson paterfamilias struggles with iterating his thoughts on paper, but that's hardly the point.
Jan
24
comment How to tell a story with the least amount of writing?
@Aerovistae The idea is that the fewer words you have, the more weight each one carries. "For sale: baby shoes, never worn" is an entire story in six words. But figuring out which six words to tell or imply a narrative is very hard, while using 90K gives you more leeway. You have, literally, many tries and more room to add layers and details in a novel. In a Kōan, the limited space forces you to be extremely choosy about your words, because you don't have room to fix it later in the story. It's the same point I was making about poetry.
Jan
24
reviewed Reject What are good places to post your work where it will be read by others?
Jan
23
reviewed Approve How many different words are in the average novel?
Jan
22
comment What are my headlines lacking?
@Jay I don't think it's much of a jump at all, but you're right, there are two potential target markets: people who want a tough vehicle to dominate other drivers, and people who want a tough vehicle to dominate the elements. There is some overlap, but they aren't all the same customers. So the OP has to figure out which is the desired target market and aim the copy there.
Jan
22
comment What are my headlines lacking?
Yes, exactly. You need humor. You need something sly. I might even dare suggest a pun.
Jan
22
revised What are my headlines lacking?
fixed bullet formatting and made titles into title case for readability
Jan
22
answered Suggest any good text editor for Mac for writing in multiple languages
Jan
21
comment How do authors gain strong familiarity with archaic and extremely rare words?
@NeilFein The Oxford American Writer's Thesaurus, actually. I save the OED for lunch.
Jan
21
comment How do authors gain strong familiarity with archaic and extremely rare words?
@Aerovistae like "defenestrate"? I love that one. :) I promise not to cackle at anything you ask about.
Jan
20
comment How do authors gain strong familiarity with archaic and extremely rare words?
Depends. What do you define as "archaic and extremely rare"? I haven't read Cormac McCarthy so I don't know what words he uses that you're looking up.
Jan
20
comment How to tell a story with the least amount of writing?
+1 for the lacuna.
Jan
20
revised Text Editors. Suggesting & Tracking Changes to Plain-Text Documents
deleted 5 characters in body
Jan
20
comment Text Editors. Suggesting & Tracking Changes to Plain-Text Documents
@ZayneSHalsall thank you! :)
Jan
20
answered How do authors gain strong familiarity with archaic and extremely rare words?
Jan
20
comment How to tell a story with the least amount of writing?
@Aerovistae Oui, je le parle un peu, et l'italien aussi, although my Italian is more Sicilian. It amused me that the right phrase for "the right word" was in French. :)
Jan
20
answered How to tell a story with the least amount of writing?
Jan
20
comment Text Editors. Suggesting & Tracking Changes to Plain-Text Documents
@ZayneSHalsall Thank you for the consideration. I acknowledge that a PDF is not "plain text" in the sense of Notepad or TextEdit. I was providing another suggestion which the OP might not have considered if he was focused on working in a particular program, and/or some other future reader of the question might find useful.
Jan
20
comment Text Editors. Suggesting & Tracking Changes to Plain-Text Documents
@ZayneSHalsall And I use Acrobat for "suggesting changes, without losing any of the original text" on a daily basis, as the question clearly specifies. I am unhappy that you would downvote a response which does, in fact, explicitly answer the question. You may not have used Acrobat that way, but it's a valid workflow.
Jan
20
comment Writing exercises to practice the art of giving unique voice to characters?
Some of my suggestions from this question may help: writers.stackexchange.com/questions/6965/…