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The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter — it's the difference between a lightning bug and the lightning. — Mark Twain

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Apr
6
answered Is a glossary needed in a novel?
Apr
6
comment To translate a novel with Westerner's point of view
Please make that part of your question (click on edit above) and the community can help you work on it.
Apr
6
comment To translate a novel with Westerner's point of view
Hi DC-Des, welcome to Writers SE. Stack Exchange isn't like other boards. We aren't a discussion forum. Posts here need to be clear, answerable questions with the potential to help others. Please see our FAQ: writers.stackexchange.com/faq We can help you with making your writing sound more like a native speaker, but we cannot do cultural research for you.
Apr
5
comment How to avoid specifying the gender in English when the original text does not specify it?
@C.A.McCann I don't favor "he as generic TPS." I favor subject-verb agreement. Switching off he/she is, using they are, using "one" or convoluted avoidance of pronouns -- all fine. But "hand it to the customer so they can sign it" makes my eyes bleed. And I did acknowledge in my above comment that not everyone agrees with me. I think you and I have had this discussion before. It's a prescriptive rule, which I cheerfully admit.
Apr
5
comment How to avoid specifying the gender in English when the original text does not specify it?
@C.A.McCann Yes, please, I'd love to see your sources on "antique singular they."
Apr
5
comment The value of labeling book sections
I think this is a discussion/Your Mileage May Vary question as written -- particularly the last paragraph. If you can tweak that to be more concrete (what are the pros and cons of many short chapters? what does a chapter need to have? where should it end?) and less "What are your thoughts?" it can stand.
Apr
5
comment How to avoid specifying the gender in English when the original text does not specify it?
@C.A.McCann ...I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about. I didn't bring up "thou."
Apr
5
comment How to avoid specifying the gender in English when the original text does not specify it?
This is a good question, but I think English/ELU might be a better fit. My VTC is only a vote to migrate, not a comment on the quality of the question. I've upvoted it.
Apr
5
comment How to avoid specifying the gender in English when the original text does not specify it?
@Soulz It depends on whom you ask. I find it abhorrent; many people are fine with it.
Apr
5
answered How likely is the “five consecutive word rule” to detect “random,” as opposed to intentional plagiarism?
Apr
5
comment How likely is the “five consecutive word rule” to detect “random,” as opposed to intentional plagiarism?
Re the "million monkeys at a million keyboards will eventually reproduce Shakespeare": as it happens, the existence of the Internet has proven that theory wrong.
Apr
5
reviewed Approve suggested edit on How likely is the “five consecutive word rule” to detect “random,” as opposed to intentional plagiarism?
Apr
4
answered How is parallel construction viewed in literature?
Apr
2
comment Ways to speed up my writing to 15 - 20 pages a day
Learn how to type faster.
Apr
2
comment How should I introduce new and complex technologies or tools?
@Mussri Another great idea, although I'll add one caveat: Don't overdo it. Gael Baudino took this concept to a ridiculous extreme in her Water! trilogy -- it was a neat writer's experiment, but a PITA to read. If you go this route, stick to one or two paragraphs at the beginning of a chapter.
Apr
2
comment Words in author's native language?
@jwpat7 "As I've seen it a few times": can you give an example? (I more or less agree with you; I'm interested to see it in context.)
Apr
2
comment How should I introduce new and complex technologies or tools?
I love this! There are plenty of ways to peel the cabbage, so to speak.
Apr
1
answered Expression or word like “aura” that can be used to describe a “force” of death enveloping your body?
Apr
1
comment Expression or word like “aura” that can be used to describe a “force” of death enveloping your body?
That's not bad, actually. "Moribundity" makes me think that he's feeling the onset of rigor mortis.
Apr
1
answered How should I introduce new and complex technologies or tools?