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comment What is the main inner conflict in Harry Potter?
The community has decided that analyzing existing works is off-topic unless it directly pertains to your own writing. You're heading in the right direction, but this particular question is still not quite there. This question will likely be put on hold; sorry.
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comment Is there anything wrong or stilted in the grammar of this short announcement?
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comment Should I turn my enormous novel into a series?
If you mean "art" to be "something which only the artist sees," and "popular fiction/art" to be something always intended for public consumption, then I guess I follow you. I understood your last statement as "write your book for you, and let the publisher tell you if anything has to change — because maybe nothing has to change, and then you can just publish straight art."
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comment Should I turn my enormous novel into a series?
I particularly like your closing statement. Start with art; edit if necessary for commerce.
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reviewed No Action Needed How do you convey nonverbal utterances?
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reviewed No Action Needed Writing a PhD thesis. Question about (an informal) introduction
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answered Should I turn my enormous novel into a series?
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comment Clear steps for developing a powerful inner conflict
This is an excellent point. Conflict does arise from plot, but it can also arise from a character forcing him/herself to act out of character. That's a stellar definition of "inner conflict."
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comment Clear steps for developing a powerful inner conflict
Do you want to add that to your answer to make it more thorough?
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comment Clear steps for developing a powerful inner conflict
That's good for half the conflict, but what about the other half? How do you also develop the character's desire for Option 1?
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reviewed No Action Needed Any Good Method for Calculating Word Count Based on An Outline?
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comment Multiple sentences in a parenthetical phrase - How do I punctuate properly?
@what I know two looks awful. I have seen it done elsewhere, and it most directly answers the OP's question, which is why I included it. But it's really awful, and the correct answer is version three.
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comment Clear steps for developing a powerful inner conflict
Can you give us some examples of inner conflict (no hyphen, by the way, and no apostrophe on ICs) which you think are weak?
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comment How to choose a good/suitable pseudonym
Your presence or reputation will be built from your stories, not your name. "Stephen King" is not a scary name out of context; King worked hard to associate his name with horror. (Ditto "Richard Bachman," which is the pseudonym King himself chose.) Choose a pseudonym you can live with and make your books as good as possible.
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reviewed No Action Needed Is there a free online alternative to Scrivener?
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reviewed No Action Needed Citing someone's work, copying and pasting fragment. Is that OK?
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reviewed No Action Needed How to name characters of unspecific nationality and race?
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reviewed Reviewed How to decide the position of short phrases?
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reviewed Approve grammar tag wiki excerpt
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answered Multiple sentences in a parenthetical phrase - How do I punctuate properly?