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answered How rough should a rough draft be
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comment My story passes in choppy blocks - how can I fix it?
@MonicaCellio oooooh! thank you for that. You learn something new every day. :)
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comment Writing and proofreading a book in English - non-native speaker
Might be a duplicate: writers.stackexchange.com/questions/2529/… Or try Critique Circle, which is free: critiquecircle.com
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comment Should I ever break up a long line of dialogue in different paragraphs?
Related, may be useful: writers.stackexchange.com/questions/16226/… and writers.stackexchange.com/questions/6977/…
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comment My story passes in choppy blocks - how can I fix it?
I went into my own user panel. I found the link to my answer, clicked on it, and copied it. I was able to do the same for a random answer of yours, so you can do the same for anyone else.
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comment in years that vs. in years when
I'd say "during years when," but this is for English SE.
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comment Synonym for 'overly obvious'?
Hi, and welcome to Writers. Requests for single words are not on-topic for us, but they are at English SE. I have flagged the mods to migrate your question.
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comment Narrating something that happened between chapters as a flashback in a present-tense novel
Works for me. Just make sure you have some kind of time-stamp or other indicator so we know when we are.
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comment Writing a Romance novel, starts in present but after two chapters the flashback starts
Aren't The Notebook, Atonement, and Titanic all structured this way? (I haven't read or seen any of them.)
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answered What is a “reflection character?” How is s/he different from an antagonist?
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comment Should I completely eliminate passive voice
@what The sentence has a subject, absolutely. I was saying that the sentence does not describe who or what is acting. And I liked your answer about where the focus of the sentence is; that's a great way to decide which voice to use.
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comment Should I completely eliminate passive voice
@what In that sentence, you're making a prediction: This event is likely to happen. Also, since electrocution is not something as common as, say, being the person who makes the coffee, I infer that electrocution has already been introduced and given context (e.g., X would have to get hit by lightning or mess around with a power generator). So either X itself is the actor (X plays with a generator) or the weather is the actor (lightning strikes X). Previous context would have supplied the actor, so I think it's okay to skip for that sentence.
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answered How to suddenly introduce a scary character, but include description?
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answered Should I completely eliminate passive voice
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comment How to avoid repeating the adjective “corresponding”?
1) try "respective." 2) requests for single words are off-topic for us, but okay at English SE.
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comment Rare list of character archetypes and psychology?
Will this list be written on a cambric shirt with no seams nor needlework?