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Aug
11
comment Does a character have to define himself to be engaging?
Show, don't tell. You're are retelling a lot like the coffee incident instead of showing the actual action. Same goes for the dialog mentioning the hippie. Why use a flashback for the breakup, if you could start your story with it? What is the goal of your character? What does he want? What are the obstacles he must overcome?
Aug
11
answered Who is the perfect rival to the right-person-wrong-time character in a love triangle?
Jun
24
awarded  Teacher
Jun
24
answered Why can't I write something longer than a few pages?
May
9
comment Which one is correct?
Agreed. But then I would repeat will to avoid confusion.
May
9
answered Which one is correct?
Apr
30
awarded  Supporter