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I write fantasy and sci fi, and I use the word write loosely, in both Arabic and English. Maybe one day I'll be screenwriter.


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awarded  Autobiographer
Apr
18
comment Essay critique: flow and how compelling it is
Is this any better?
Apr
18
revised Essay critique: flow and how compelling it is
added 97 characters in body; edited title
Apr
17
asked Essay critique: flow and how compelling it is
Apr
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awarded  Organizer
Apr
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revised What is the correct word/term that needs to be before the names of the maker of the project?
Added tag, corrected selling and grammar, some rewording
Apr
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suggested suggested edit on What is the correct word/term that needs to be before the names of the maker of the project?
Apr
17
comment How do I organize a massive collection of personal files and writing?
Evernote doesn't do everything OneNote does but it's cross-platform which is pretty important for some.
Apr
17
comment Software to change American punctuation to British
I would try and find a writing style book, and then write out a script to make everything fit that style
Apr
16
answered Improving techniques independently: Description
Apr
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revised Critique a short essay
deleted 106 characters in body
Apr
15
answered Which e-book formats to use to get a larger readership?
Apr
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revised Critique a short essay
Minor edits to essay
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13
revised Critique a short essay
Edited essay to reflect feedback
Apr
12
comment Critique a short essay
When the part about suitcases comes after the part about the taxi it implies, for me, causality, i.e. there wasn't much I could do because I had 2 suitcases and had no idea where I should go.The change in order changes the meaning for me.
Apr
12
comment Critique a short essay
@LaurenIpsum I actually didn't have the word fleshy in the previous revision, do you think I should remove it?
Apr
12
comment Critique a short essay
I'm always bad with paragraphs - are those points good break points for paragraphs?
Apr
12
revised Critique a short essay
Added paragraphs to essay
Apr
12
comment Critique a short essay
It can be less than 2500 characters but not more.
Apr
12
revised Critique a short essay
Elaborate 4th point