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Blogging about the Federalist Papers, writing an indie RPG, and "technical information engineering" (read: tech writing) for CA Technologies. Follow me @AwesomeSchaefer!


Jan
22
comment What are my headlines lacking?
I think it would be helpful if you could articulate what the "value missing... that my headlines usually have" is. Are your other headlines wittier? Shorter and punchier? Funnier? (Even) more direct?
Jan
21
comment How do greetings vary with time of day?
This question is unclear. Are you asking "What greeting would a character use at noon? I want the reader to know that the time is 12:00, and I want to do it through dialogue."
Jan
21
comment Text Editors. Suggesting & Tracking Changes to Plain-Text Documents
+1 for suggesting a simple markup and version control. I use [^MultiMarkdownFootnotes] to annotate my own text. I type the footnotes as seen here, then publish to Marked/HTML and look over the footnotes as I read. Then I go back in and make changes (or don't). <br> [^MultiMarkdownFootnotes]: This is a footnote.