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Jan 6 |
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Possible interactions of punctuation marks with the word “however” in a novel @guypursey I agree that people normally don't speak like this, I'm still unsure whether this narrator is the main character since I`m still describing setting at this point. In the next chapter the main character will be introduced. So I guess I should decide on this first. |
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Jan 4 |
asked | Possible interactions of punctuation marks with the word “however” in a novel |
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Jan 1 |
awarded | Scholar |
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Jan 1 |
accepted | Switching from past to present tense? |
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Dec 28 |
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Switching from past to present tense? I have to agree that both ideas are appealing and could fit the book. However I am still leaning toward the flashback beginning for a few reasons, first I avoid having to use a line like 20 years earlier. second, I can introduce the character while he`s still young and surprise the reader when he`s suddenly 10 years older. but then there is still the issue of rising action during the more boring flashbacks necessary for the reader to understand the character. |
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Dec 26 |
awarded | Supporter |
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Dec 25 |
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Switching from past to present tense? I really want the climax to be a surprise so the reader is kept in suspense, instead of them already knowing the ending. |
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Dec 25 |
awarded | Student |
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Dec 25 |
awarded | Editor |
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Dec 25 |
revised |
Switching from past to present tense? deleted 16 characters in body; edited title |
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Dec 25 |
asked | Switching from past to present tense? |
