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comment How do you write boy & girl protagonists without turning them into a love story?
@NeilFein Hmm, do you doubt that my statement is true? Or are you saying that it is offensive to make true statements that people would rather believe are not true?
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answered Constructed Language - how to spell words that will be mispronounced in English
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answered How do you write boy & girl protagonists without turning them into a love story?
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comment The “Rules” of Writing
-- Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do. -- About sentence fragments. -- Vague analogies are as bas as, like, whatever.
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comment The “Rules” of Writing
Taken too literally, this would preclude most science fiction, as most writers have never been to another planet or travelled in time. :-)
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comment The “Rules” of Writing
Isaac Asimov (a well-known sci-fi writer if the name isn't familiar to you) once wrote that when he was writing a story, he always began with a general idea, then came up with an ending, then a beginning, and then worked out how to get from the beginning to the ending.
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comment The “Rules” of Writing
I disagree with number 3. I've read stories where it's "Bob said ... Sally said ... Bob said ... Sally said ... Fred said ..." and it's boring and repetitive. But yes, I understand that the opposite extreme, trying to come up with a million different ways to say "said", quickly becomes obvious and distracting. "Bob said ... Sally replied ... Bob interjected ... Sally whispered ... Fred cautioned ..." etc.
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comment The “Rules” of Writing
Personally, I think an excellent example of excessive description is Jules Verne. Like in 20,000 Leagues, he was constantly going into long descriptions of the flora and fauna that the heroes saw as they travelled. I don't care. One literary critic commented, "Verne's writing improves the instant you put down the book", which I think was very true. The Cliff notes of Verne's writing tend to be much more interesting than the original.
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comment The “Rules” of Writing
I wouldn't say, "don't go into detail", but "seek the right balance of detail". If you just say, "She was beautiful", that's boring. But if you go into great detail about the color of her hair, her height and weight, the style of clothes she wore, etc, yes, you risk describing YOUR ideal of beauty that may not match the readers. More important, though, is the issue of boring the reader with detail not relevant to the story. When the ninja assassin suddenly attacks the hero, we want to quickly get into the action, not a long description of the exact color and texture of the ninja's headband.
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comment The “Rules” of Writing
It's a good general rule, but like almost any rule, if applied mindlessly you can get absurd results. If you tell me, "Bob was a very rude person", that's kind of boring. But if you have scenes where he is rude to everyone he meets, I'll get the message much more effectively. But you don't have to be ridiculous about it. If you want to say that, for example, a certain character is from Britain, it's perfectly okay to just say, "Bob is from Britain". You don't have to give subtle hints about it and beat around the bush.
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revised How do you determine if a plot device is too coincidental?
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answered How do you determine if a plot device is too coincidental?
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comment English, Commas
It's not necessarily obvious that "Survival of the Sickest" is a book. At least, not from this stand-alone sentence. It might be an article in a magazine, or a TV documentary, or a speech.
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answered English, Commas
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answered How to turn an unknown detail in the story into a mystery instead of a lacking detail?
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answered Techniques to avoid superlatives in intense fiction scenes
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comment Why are the paragraphs of an document often indented and not vertically separated?
Late addendum: Yes, I know what is generally meant by "academic writing". What I was trying to say is that I have never heard of the idea of indenting paragraphs referred to as "academic style".
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comment Map of my fantasy world - how do realms, kingdoms, cities, towns and villages fit into it?
In the United States, there are laws that give technical legal meanings to words like city, town, and village. So, for example, a place with a hundred people might go through the legal process to be declared a city while a place with ten thousand people has not done that and so is legally something else. But that said, in normal, non-legal-technicality conversation, a city is generally understood to be bigger than a town or village. There are no hard and fast numbers about how much bigger.
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answered Can a foreign language novel have English character names?
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comment Is CreateSpace 100% free for self-publishing?
... at the publisher because there was a problem with his cover, like it was their fault that he'd never gotten a proof and reviewed it.