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Nov
10
revised Is there a description of location required in intense moments of the story like in a love story
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Nov
10
revised Is the opening of this detective short story gripping enough to read on? Can it be shortened?
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Nov
10
revised Is the opening of this detective short story gripping enough to read on? Can it be shortened?
I have now tried to be more specific on what i am looking for as answers.