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Nov
9
comment Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
On second thought, make it an alien instead of burglar. That day is coming soon!
Nov
8
comment Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
Other than that, your intro was really good.
Nov
8
comment Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
Does anyone actually read anymore anyway?