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May
15
comment Storyboard a Novel?
Well, I did, simply because the answer is off-topic. The question is about basing a book on a script, while you answer is about basing a movie on the book; a completely reversed relation.
May
15
comment How to distill a plot into a logline?
(2) that's I no longer watch Hollywood movies. You've seen a hundred, you've seen them all. (3) I agree - one of these rules that exist only to be broken. This I can accept.
May
15
comment How to distill a plot into a logline?
Personally, such rigid step-by-step recipes for ANY creative work (even 25 words long) really stroke me the wrong way. This is trying to squeeze every single written work into a narrow frame. I wonder how your logline would treat, say, Game of Thrones without making it shallow.
May
15
comment Is it OK to have two different POVs in a same paragraph (third-person omniscient narrator)?
Acceptable - yes, this is what Omniscient means after all. But usually it's cheesy, the easy way out. OTOH, you can always reflect this through knowledge of the other character: Kuo reflecting on likes/dislikes of Mei-Ling.
May
15
comment Is there such a thing as a “reverse analogy”?
@justhalf: 1. Lauren is a female name, 2. look at our rep. We've spent a lot of time here on Writers.se, so we got to know each other a little.
May
15
answered Is there such a thing as a “reverse analogy”?
May
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comment Is there such a thing as a “reverse analogy”?
@justhalf: Analogy: comparing relations: A is related to B is like C is related to D. Simile: comparing items: A is like B. Metaphor: A [used instead of B, which is similar to A] (actually Lauren might have confused you a bit here because she wrote it in form of a simile, but if I wrote "AIDS attacks your body's army", then "your body's army" is the metaphor meaning white blood cells).
May
15
answered Storyboard a Novel?
May
13
answered How to distill a plot into a logline?
May
12
answered Successful stories that don't follow the standard story template?
May
12
reviewed No Action Needed I have too much dialogue, how do I add more description?
May
11
revised How can you represent music in writing
added 11 characters in body
May
11
answered How can you represent music in writing
May
11
comment What is a good location to publish my research in a public setting?
I believe academia.stackexchange.com might provide more helpful answers.
May
10
reviewed No Action Needed I have too much dialogue, how do I add more description?
May
9
comment Can a good headline contain a pronoun?
Try narrowing down to "3rd person pronoun, and a verb".
May
8
reviewed No Action Needed How can I (as a new author) publish a collection of essays?
May
8
answered Do the following scenes feel like flashbacks?
May
8
comment Writing non-fiction in three perspectives?
A note: 2nd person writing is more than addressing the reader directly by the narrator. Your example piece seems to be all 1st person, narrator talking in general, addressing the reader or speaking of own experiences. For 3rd person your text must follow someone else. For 2nd person you claim direct actions and states of the reader.
May
8
comment Writing non-fiction in three perspectives?
I wholeheartedly agree. Rules of good writing require consistent perspective and tense. Excellent, experienced writers break these rules for specific effects. Poor, beginning writers break these rules and make a mess of it. What you do seems very convoluted to me, and considering this is your first book, there's more than a bit of a chance you'll make it an awkward, repulsive mess, instead of something with strong impact.