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comment How to write a prophecy?
Note these all odd prophecies come from "plot twists" that occurred later. You have a story with improbable events, and then you wear these events into fancy wording that makes them sound impossible, or you have a story driven by (not quite defined) prophecy, and then you define the prophecy as to fulfill the story including the failures at avoiding it. This all looks cool and mystical if you look at it from the front: a story weaved around caveats of the prophecy. But it's simple really if the prophecy was made to fit the story in non-obvious manner.
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answered How to write a prophecy?
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comment Methods for writing from an alternate gender/age/cultural viewpoint?
culture has enormous influence on one's character, mindset, value system, patterns of thinking. It shapes personality to degree a person not versed in varied cultures is unable to begin to imagine! Entering the mind of a person brought up in a different culture is very difficult unless you know such people in person, deeply. I assure you trying to write from perspective of a Gypsy, or a Hasid is nowhere similar to writing from perspective of a typical white person brought up in Western Culture. Different values, different moral system, different priorities, and outlook on others.
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comment Delaying narrative/actions
Straight angle turn, then.
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answered Delaying narrative/actions
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comment Delaying narrative/actions
a straight curve?
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revised Am I using too many adjectives/adverbs in the following piece?
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answered Am I using too many adjectives/adverbs in the following piece?
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comment Best Tool to Create User Guides
Absolutely - this sprang to my mind immediately. Just make sure to keep a friendly, up-to-date table of contents/index, as these aren't automatically created (or what is created automatically is far from friendly) and the wiki will be an awesome tool. Especially, if the wiki is for internal use, do allow user edits. They frequently contribute good tips on usage patterns the developers didn't even think about, and the discussion pages save the internal helpdesk a lot of headaches, as the users can guide each other.
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answered I would like to illustrate a poem
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reviewed No Action Needed I would like to illustrate a poem
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comment How to deal with common Earth references in a non-Earth setting?
Coming from the "My Little Pony" fandom, I must say this problem is all too common: Matters of inequine treatment of prisoners, choice of Equan Sciences, Equaformation of foreign planets, and on the other hoof, nopony knows what these 'humans' are. By Celestia's beard, will you get out of my mane already? Learn some culture, you hipparion, or just go eat a hayburger or something... :)
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comment How should you format short speech by consecutive speakers?
also - no special rules of indentation for dialogue. If you indent (tabulate) normal paragraphs, do the same with dialogue. If you flush all to left but make wider paragraph breaks, same for dialogue paragraphs. There may be an extra space or so of indent (on top of the tab indent) in case you separate dialogue with em-dashes, instead of enclosing in double quotes, but that's fairly rare in English prose.
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answered How can I write better code-based reference documentation for programming interfaces?
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awarded  Civic Duty
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answered How do you visualize plot structure?
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comment Must protagonists be flawed for satisfying character evolution?
There's a whole genre of what you're looking for: Pastorals. Perfect protagonists living happy, simple lives, romantic and idealized. Of course the genre isn't very renowned nowadays...
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comment Must protagonists be flawed for satisfying character evolution?
A flawless protagonist would never allow these things to happen, showing enough foresight to prevent them. Lack of caution or foresight is a flaw. Extremely bad luck is a flaw too. And a happy person may lead a happy life despite their flaws, and utopia without flaws will bore to death.