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GM-ing d10, Writing d8, Programming d6. World Champion of Just Dance.


Apr
12
comment Is there such a thing as a “reverse analogy”?
@LaurenIpsum I thought similes/metaphors were a kind of analogy. As for the second sentence, the idea was that the outside welcomed her in a cold way, not that she didn't welcome the cold. Maybe being "welcomed by cold air" doesn't make sense in English.
Apr
12
asked Is there such a thing as a “reverse analogy”?
Apr
1
comment Introducing a concept to twist on it - problem
Replace the father by the mother, and you still have the original concept
Mar
31
comment Twist in kishōtenketsu vs. twist in Western plots
Also, Ten seems to often be unrelated to Ki and Shou, until Ketsu unifies the whole thing
Mar
8
comment How to travel in a government restricted setting?
@NeilFein It seems that the OP is not asking about what to write, and already has a plot and setting and all. The issue is more about how to deal with a specific plot hole - whether that is on topic or not is debatable though.
Mar
7
answered How to travel in a government restricted setting?
Mar
4
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Mar
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accepted Effect of real world brands and/or places on story tone
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asked Effect of real world brands and/or places on story tone
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