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comment Suggestions for revising style and cadence within a children's book
Yes, I think the commas make all the difference.
Jul
29
comment Suggestions for revising style and cadence within a children's book
I agree, this sentence was a little tricky for me so a six year old is going to really struggle: "That old buzzard was offended when he heard that the squirrel or anyone else could think there was a more amazing bird than he."
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accepted In a “learn to do X” book, should a section review come before the quiz / exercises or after?
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comment In a “learn to do X” book, should a section review come before the quiz / exercises or after?
Thanks for the comment, it looked OK on my browser at home, but you're right!
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asked In a “learn to do X” book, should a section review come before the quiz / exercises or after?