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Photographer, musician and programmer.


Nov
12
revised Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
Don't need to say sorry so much!
Nov
12
revised Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
Added own example.
Nov
12
revised What effect does the gender of the narrator have on a story?
Difficult to read, fixed up wording. Some points still a little unclear.
Nov
11
revised Why write in a different genre than what you read?
Some wording.
Nov
6
revised “Its vs ”the" when referring to an element belonging to the previous sentence
deleted 5 characters in body
Nov
6
revised “Its vs ”the" when referring to an element belonging to the previous sentence
Made examples easier to read by themselves.
Oct
23
revised How many pages long should a chapter book be?
Rewording to make it easier to read. Removed book name as not relevant.
Oct
23
revised Writing is it the plot, subplot or backstory
Rewording some parts to make them flow better.
Oct
23
revised Writing for the web: how do you submit your content
Minor word flow.
Oct
23
revised Can't write, can plan
Word flow and punctuation.
Oct
23
revised How to write good erotic scene?
Reworded (probably not naturally English speaking).
Oct
23
revised How do you effectively develop a plot when you have a proper back story?
Wording and basic corrections.
Oct
23
revised Precedence: P.S or Address?
Formatting and some wording changes.
Oct
23
revised Can't write, can plan
Word flow, excerpt quotes and some punctuation.
Oct
22
revised Can I be a good writer without reading a lot?
Word flow and some extra examples.
Oct
22
revised Can I be a good writer without reading a lot?
Some punctuation etc + concluding paragraph.
Oct
16
revised Improving the flow/rhythm of the following comparison
added 255 characters in body
Oct
15
revised Need A Way To Avoid Excessive Use Of Subject When Refering To Character
Highlighted pronouns.
May
24
revised Vision/dream as an effective opening?
edited tags
Apr
13
revised Potential confusion: referring to home planet as “Earth”
added 61 characters in body