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May
22
revised Skipping details in a scene
deleted 17 characters in body
May
22
revised Skipping details in a scene
Added example of rewriting from answers.
Dec
5
revised Am I over-explaining or being condescending to the reader?
Removed bolded sections (too much influence while reading examples). Moved question to top to add context.
Nov
25
revised Would a paid-for review from Kirkus give me real insight into quality of my manuscript?
Punctuation and some wording.
Nov
12
revised Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
Don't need to say sorry so much!
Nov
12
revised Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
Added own example.
Nov
12
revised What effect does the gender of the narrator have on a story?
Difficult to read, fixed up wording. Some points still a little unclear.
Nov
11
revised Why write in a different genre than what you read?
Some wording.
Nov
6
revised “Its vs ”the" when referring to an element belonging to the previous sentence
deleted 5 characters in body
Nov
6
revised “Its vs ”the" when referring to an element belonging to the previous sentence
Made examples easier to read by themselves.
Oct
23
revised How many pages long should a chapter book be?
Rewording to make it easier to read. Removed book name as not relevant.
Oct
23
revised Writing is it the plot, subplot or backstory
Rewording some parts to make them flow better.
Oct
23
revised Writing for the web: how do you submit your content
Minor word flow.
Oct
23
revised Can't write, can plan
Word flow and punctuation.
Oct
23
revised How to write good erotic scene?
Reworded (probably not naturally English speaking).
Oct
23
revised How do you effectively develop a plot when you have a proper back story?
Wording and basic corrections.
Oct
23
revised Precedence: P.S or Address?
Formatting and some wording changes.
Oct
23
revised Can't write, can plan
Word flow, excerpt quotes and some punctuation.
Oct
22
revised Can I be a good writer without reading a lot?
Word flow and some extra examples.
Oct
22
revised Can I be a good writer without reading a lot?
Some punctuation etc + concluding paragraph.