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Photographer, musician and programmer.


Nov
6
suggested approved edit on “Its vs ”the" when referring to an element belonging to the previous sentence
Nov
6
comment What does Character development actually mean?
The most effective character development is that which is shown, not told, in my opinion (and hopefully in general). The Han and Greedo scene mentioned above is a good example of this. You learn a great deal about Han Solo through this scene. He's in debt, he's on the run, and he cares for little but himself (or so he thought...). Characters can often be developed on the fly, as if you are learning the character as you write your story. For some characters you may need only start with little more than a single sentence and everything else can be improvised from that.
Oct
23
suggested rejected edit on Literary criticism handbook
Oct
23
revised How many pages long should a chapter book be?
Rewording to make it easier to read. Removed book name as not relevant.
Oct
23
revised Writing is it the plot, subplot or backstory
Rewording some parts to make them flow better.
Oct
23
revised Writing for the web: how do you submit your content
Minor word flow.
Oct
23
revised Can't write, can plan
Word flow and punctuation.
Oct
23
revised How to write good erotic scene?
Reworded (probably not naturally English speaking).
Oct
23
suggested approved edit on Writing is it the plot, subplot or backstory
Oct
23
suggested approved edit on How to write good erotic scene?
Oct
23
suggested approved edit on How many pages long should a chapter book be?
Oct
23
revised How do you effectively develop a plot when you have a proper back story?
Wording and basic corrections.
Oct
23
revised Precedence: P.S or Address?
Formatting and some wording changes.
Oct
23
reviewed Reviewed Precedence: P.S or Address?
Oct
23
suggested approved edit on Precedence: P.S or Address?
Oct
23
suggested approved edit on How do you effectively develop a plot when you have a proper back story?
Oct
23
revised Can't write, can plan
Word flow, excerpt quotes and some punctuation.
Oct
23
suggested approved edit on Can't write, can plan
Oct
23
suggested approved edit on Can't write, can plan
Oct
22
revised Can I be a good writer without reading a lot?
Word flow and some extra examples.