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Dec
9
answered What is the benefit of writing formally?
Dec
5
revised Am I over-explaining or being condescending to the reader?
Removed bolded sections (too much influence while reading examples). Moved question to top to add context.
Dec
5
answered Am I over-explaining or being condescending to the reader?
Dec
5
suggested approved edit on Am I over-explaining or being condescending to the reader?
Nov
25
revised Would a paid-for review from Kirkus give me real insight into quality of my manuscript?
Punctuation and some wording.
Nov
25
awarded  Custodian
Nov
25
reviewed Leave Closed Should I write my novel?
Nov
25
reviewed Reviewed Would a paid-for review from Kirkus give me real insight into quality of my manuscript?
Nov
25
suggested approved edit on Would a paid-for review from Kirkus give me real insight into quality of my manuscript?
Nov
25
reviewed Reviewed How to indicate that a single letter was removed from a quotation
Nov
25
comment How to indicate that a single letter was removed from a quotation
Without context, you could possibly write your quote as, "It it possible that God "desires all people to be saved," thus eliminating the need to drop the "s".
Nov
25
reviewed Close Spaces within abbreviations, acronyms, and initials
Nov
25
reviewed Close What isthe difference between a novel and a documentry
Nov
12
revised Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
Don't need to say sorry so much!
Nov
12
revised Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
Added own example.
Nov
12
answered Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
Nov
12
suggested approved edit on Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
Nov
12
comment Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
This should be a comment on the question, I think.
Nov
12
comment Show Don't Tell when Recounting Events
It's a bit like taking the phrase, "Actions speak louder than words," and using that in describing to the reader how Lana realised the guilt Terrence felt.
Nov
12
revised What effect does the gender of the narrator have on a story?
Difficult to read, fixed up wording. Some points still a little unclear.