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Mar 22 |
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Do you have to be good at grammar to get published? @Aerovistae, I'm not sure either, but I think it means "manuscript." |
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Jun 25 |
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Does my story beginning hook the reader? (dialogue + narration)? Also, saying "One thing for sure: she wasn't asleep," isn't correct either. First, that is an incorrect use of a colon. Colons are typically used to prefix a listing of items. I think you meant to use a semi-colon (;). Secondly, the first part of the sentence should be "One thing [was] for sure." On the whole, I liked this though! |
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Jun 25 |
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Does my story beginning hook the reader? (dialogue + narration)? "She didn't fell the earthquake..." I believe you mean 'feel' here. |
