| bio | website | jacobselevator.wordpress.com |
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| location | New York, United States | |
| age | 27 | |
| visits | member for | 1 year, 5 months |
| seen | Apr 1 at 19:49 | |
| stats | profile views | 6 |
Programmer, aspiring writer, tends to be tired.
Founder and ardent follower of Jacobism, a plug-in religion.
Avid coffee-drinker.
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Jan 1 |
asked | How to create varying, yet realistic, speech patterns |
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Dec 29 |
comment |
How to explain a war scene? @JATagala, you can have one of the men sacrifice himself to save the king. This would show their devotion to the cause, especially if the dying soldier had plans for the future or a family. Exactly what do you mean when you write "the blow on the king"? Do you mean the way he is affected by seeing his men die? |
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Dec 29 |
answered | How to explain a war scene? |
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Dec 25 |
answered | Clarity: What supports it? What hinders it? |
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Dec 25 |
answered | Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading? |
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Dec 20 |
awarded | Analytical |
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Dec 19 |
awarded | Student |
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Dec 19 |
awarded | Editor |
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Dec 19 |
revised |
How to write realistic female dialogue Clarification |
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Dec 19 |
awarded | Scholar |
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Dec 19 |
accepted | How to write realistic female dialogue |
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Dec 19 |
asked | How to write realistic female dialogue |
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Dec 19 |
awarded | Supporter |
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Dec 18 |
awarded | Teacher |
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Dec 18 |
answered | Source ideas for monsters in a fantasy novel? |
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Dec 18 |
answered | How do I round out a powerful character? |
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Dec 18 |
awarded | Autobiographer |