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Programmer, aspiring writer, tends to be tired.
Founder and ardent follower of Jacobism, a plug-in religion.
Avid coffee-drinker.


Jan
1
asked How to create varying, yet realistic, speech patterns
Dec
29
comment How to explain a war scene?
@JATagala, you can have one of the men sacrifice himself to save the king. This would show their devotion to the cause, especially if the dying soldier had plans for the future or a family. Exactly what do you mean when you write "the blow on the king"? Do you mean the way he is affected by seeing his men die?
Dec
29
answered How to explain a war scene?
Dec
25
answered Clarity: What supports it? What hinders it?
Dec
25
answered Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
Dec
20
awarded  Analytical
Dec
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awarded  Student
Dec
19
awarded  Editor
Dec
19
revised How to write realistic female dialogue
Clarification
Dec
19
awarded  Scholar
Dec
19
accepted How to write realistic female dialogue
Dec
19
asked How to write realistic female dialogue
Dec
19
awarded  Supporter
Dec
18
awarded  Teacher
Dec
18
answered Source ideas for monsters in a fantasy novel?
Dec
18
answered How do I round out a powerful character?
Dec
18
awarded  Autobiographer