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This 'about me' will probably be updated when I have the time to edit every site-profile manually, and when I can be more active on the network.

Till then, this remains a placeholder account with all of my previous questions, comments, and whatever else is tied to my alias on SE.

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Dec
28
comment Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
"nothing's related, no context": solved in the revision. - "Too much info": That'll need some more work. - "switching between tenses erratically and inconsistently": I seriously can't see where this came from! Are you sure you're reading the revised version? Here: link
Dec
28
comment Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
@lauren Could you take a look at the revised version (the above link) and message me somehow? See if you could start a chat since I can't yet...
Dec
28
comment Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
The chat room is not available... Do you think you can reach me someway else? Maybe you start the chat?
Dec
26
comment Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
I'm not sure the chat room is yet open for me but I'll see what I can do.
Dec
26
comment Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
That's very thorough! I had some questions, objections, etc… But I really need to go now and I could only upload another version I hope is better… Please read and comment again here; if I didn't add a comment with my questions, etc… before then! Thanks a lot.
Dec
26
revised Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
Following advice
Dec
22
revised Is emphasizing a point by underlining still appropriate?
Title edit
Dec
22
suggested suggested edit on Is emphasizing a point by underlining still appropriate?
Dec
21
revised Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
added 52 characters in body
Dec
21
revised Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
added 47 characters in body
Dec
21
comment Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
@justkt - The first "these" link mentions (Does this paragraph make you want to keep reading?" So?
Dec
21
revised Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
added 338 characters in body; edited tags; edited title
Dec
21
revised Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
added 338 characters in body; edited tags; edited title
Dec
20
revised Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
Edited Body.
Dec
20
comment Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
Sorry, but I can't really find the guidelines for a 'critique request.' My impression was that if something was read, and people said their opinion of it, that's criticizing... Pretty much, those 1100 words should get the reader into the story, hopefully with line getting him to the next.
Dec
20
revised Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
Edited Body.
Dec
19
revised Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
Edited the title.
Dec
19
asked Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading?
Dec
1
comment Does this beginning hook the reader?
That's the problem; I only write, I don't analyze it that way... I understand that as I get used to it, I won't have to and that you ask this only because up until now, I don't seem to have that objective... To clear things up, I'll post another question, about the same thing in the same story; but I'll give myself more time first, until I find a beginning that'd attract me even if I didn't know the story ahead. Wow! I really blubbered!
Dec
1
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