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Long time Linux user (currently kubuntu). Use Windows 98, and 7 when I have to. Programmed in many languages, currently using bash and awk for most things. Learning Python.

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Duplex printing emulator for non-duplex printers (Linux)


Sep
26
revised What are these extra phrases added to the beginning of sentences called?
Rewrote based on feedback/down-vote
Sep
26
comment What are these extra phrases added to the beginning of sentences called?
@JohnM.Landsberg OK. I overstepped, but the link for types of phrases is still useful.
Sep
25
comment Is extraneous language appropriate in academic writing?
Sometimes, phrases like this are the result of writing ideas in the order you think of them - which is great for capturing them to start with, but they should only remain in a finished work when they are the simplest and clearest way to express a concept.
Sep
25
comment Is extraneous language appropriate in academic writing?
I added an answer to the question you referred to above. Prepositional (and other) phrases have their uses, but should be used sparingly in an academic context where ideas are often complicated enough without using complicated sentences to express them.
Sep
25
answered What are these extra phrases added to the beginning of sentences called?
Sep
25
comment What are these extra phrases added to the beginning of sentences called?
When people are talking, they often say something to get the other person's attention, to gain momentum, or to organize their thoughts before jumping in to the main statement. Generally, you might find it useful to have some of these in a draft - just to let the thoughts get onto "paper", but most should be edited out of written material because they don't add anything. They're just a header. In less formal writing, they can be used to convey personality, mood, or style, so they're not all bad.
Sep
25
comment Overusing “the” and “I”
The way I was taught is that using I too many times draws attention away from what you're saying to you. It becomes look what I know or look what I did instead of just conveying the information and it gets boring very quickly. Once it's known who the actor is in the topic, it doesn't need to be repeated unless it clarifies something.
Sep
25
comment Overusing “the” and “I”
@Jay No idea technically, but "the Russias" means to me that it's a more formal designation of something commonly agreed upon. Not just any Russias, but the Russias - the ones that everybody knows and agrees are Russias.
Sep
11
comment Changing the way one addresses a character in a dialogue to create variation
Mostly unrelated to the question, but, it all reads pretty smoothly except "Should I feel happy or guilty because of this?". The "I" coming out of nowhere - at least in this excerpt - was very jarring. It's a switch of POV one sentence long.
Sep
4
comment Can Readers Relate to a Book without Humans?
Just as a side note, it can also be effective to use an "alien" which is unknown or even possibly unknowable as a part of a story - like whatever created the monoliths in 2001 (at least in the movie version). Obviously, this would be an unlikely candidate for a main character.
Sep
4
comment Is it possible to establish a relation between word count and page count?
Unless you're publishing it yourself, the publisher will almost undoubtedly reformat your manuscript - which can significantly alter the page count. Some electronic formats may even set up pages on the fly depending on screen size, etc. Nothing, except an editor ;) will change your word count.
Aug
27
comment Stupid Villain rather than Dark Lord
Another angle: The most dangerous force in the universe is love without wisdom. It might not make for a good fantasy plot - or certainly might take more work, but when people are motivated by love, but don't understand or can't accept what would really help in a situation, they can be almost unstoppable forces of destruction.
Aug
13
comment Does a character have to define himself to be engaging?
This advice really makes sense. Real people, even the most pedestrian ones, are complicated and mostly unknown. Without at least some of that, a character is not going to feel convincing/real.
Aug
13
comment Does this passage break the rules of telling and not showing?
The content itself seems fine, but using inconsistent tenses in the sentences wasn't. Also, it's a little hard to "understand" something when you're already writing/speaking about it. "Understood" might be better. These things made me want to stop reading even though the content was fine.
Aug
6
comment Any documentaries or other inspirational movies about creative writing?
The Magic of Belle Isle is primarily a love story, but it also deals with writing and inspiration.
Jul
9
comment Avoid blending Fantasy and Sci Fi
@Tannalein That's a good point and does seem true for most of what I've read. Where do you put something like Dune (the whole series of books) in that sort of analysis?
Jun
19
comment In end user documentation, should screenshots come before or after the text that references them?
This is the answer. A screenshot is just a (somewhat) pretty picture until the reader knows why they are looking at it. Many screen shots have a lot of details in them and the reader needs to be guided as to what to look for and in what order. The designer (and you) know why the screen is organized the way it is. Tell the user so they know how to look at it as well. Perception is all about setting expectations and frames of reference.
Jun
12
answered Avoid blending Fantasy and Sci Fi
May
15
comment What do you do if you enjoy writing, but have no ideas?
You could go to a news website where new stories keep popping up. Go to a library open a random book to a random page. There are so many places to get an initial idea - and then apply the suggestions in the answers below. How does "Genetic sequencing of the floating bladderwort" sound for a starting point (found on wikipedia's home page just now)? It even sounds funny to start with.
Apr
4
comment How can I translate my poems in English that it doesn't sound odd/non poetic for English speaker audiences?
+1 Great detailed answer.