Peretz

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11 Revisions

Mar 3	revised	Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? deleted 55 characters in body
Mar 3	revised	Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? New iteration after considering some of the comments
Feb 26	revised	How can I make this essay more succinct? edited title
Jan 5	revised	How to further improve the flow and crispness in the essay? edited body
Jan 4	revised	How to further improve the flow and crispness in the essay? added 1765 characters in body
Dec 15	revised	How to further improve the flow and crispness in the essay? edited title
Nov 29	revised	Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? deleted 807 characters in body
Nov 25	revised	Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? added 190 characters in body
Nov 25	revised	Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? added 2726 characters in body
Nov 3	revised	Paragraph flow, verb inversion and last sentence tone deleted 6 characters in body
Nov 3	revised	Paragraph flow, verb inversion and last sentence tone new edition of the paragraph