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| visits | member for | 1 year, 6 months |
| seen | Apr 7 '12 at 21:28 | |
| stats | profile views | 4 |
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Dec 15 |
asked | How to further improve the flow and crispness in the essay? |
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Nov 29 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? deleted 807 characters in body |
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Nov 29 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? Your feedback is great. I was just wondering if you have any comments in the last paragraph in my essay? |
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Nov 25 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? Sound good to me. |
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Nov 25 |
awarded | Supporter |
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Nov 25 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? Does not sounds to broken into parts? |
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Nov 25 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? I tried to do a parallel structure. do you have anything in mind on how to break it into parts? |
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Nov 25 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? added 190 characters in body |
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Nov 25 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? Thanks for the initial observations. I was just wondering which sentences draw most of your attention about being to long winded. |
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Nov 25 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? added 2726 characters in body |
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Nov 25 |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? @justkt. Thanks for the edition. It fits better the guidelines of the forum. |
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Nov 25 |
asked | Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? |
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Nov 3 |
revised |
Paragraph flow, verb inversion and last sentence tone deleted 6 characters in body |
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Nov 3 |
awarded | Editor |
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Nov 3 |
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Paragraph flow, verb inversion and last sentence tone new edition of the paragraph |
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Nov 3 |
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Paragraph flow, verb inversion and last sentence tone Lisa, thank you so much for your answer. It is truly fantastic. I have edited my question to include the new structure in case someone wants to check a newer version. |
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Nov 3 |
awarded | Scholar |
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Nov 3 |
accepted | Paragraph flow, verb inversion and last sentence tone |
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Nov 3 |
awarded | Student |
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Nov 2 |
asked | Paragraph flow, verb inversion and last sentence tone |
