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accepted | Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? |
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Feb 27 |
accepted | How can I make this essay more succinct? |
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accepted | How to further improve the flow and crispness in the essay? |
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Nov 3 |
accepted | Paragraph flow, verb inversion and last sentence tone |