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A freelance editor, I specialize in fiction but I've worked on non-fiction as well as web copy, corporate literature, and non-profit materials. I also edit and write for the group blog Magnificent Nose, which covers many topics but gravitates towards articles about writing and reading.

I'm also a lyricist; a guitarist for the band Baroque & Hungry; and I'm a touring cyclist.

You can contact me about editing matters here. (Please don't use this form for Stack Exchange business; instead, ping me in chat.)


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revised My story portrays a process, not a conflict - how do I make the process my focus?
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May
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revised Help write a book review, please
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revised Has this dialogue enough suspense to engage the reader?
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May
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revised Help write a book review, please
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May
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revised Is my essay on group learning clear and well-organized?
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May
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revised Potential confusion: referring to home planet as “Earth”
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May
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revised Write a resume objective that expresses my desire to hone and sharpen my skills
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May
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revised Feedback on sign-up email announcement
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May
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revised Does this sign-up email announcement sound friendly and conversational?
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May
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revised How to obtain a thoughtful critique of a job application cover letter?
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May
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revised requesting a review/critique of an outro narrative
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May
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revised Trying to indicate that the frequency is annoying
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May
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revised First conversation scenes I've written (looking for errors, conventions, and improvements according to writting standards).
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May
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revised Personal Page - review request
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May
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revised Feedback on technical blog post
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May
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revised How to improve this introductory paragraph (to fit writting standards and grab the reader's attention)?
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May
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revised Can my paragraph use better adjectives and descriptions?
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May
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revised Asking for exam results
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May
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revised Which version of these three lines is more likely to attract the interest of the reader ? (character's viewpoint vs omnicient narrator)
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May
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revised Critique of short essay
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