Neil Fein

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A freelance editor, I specialize in fiction but I've worked on non-fiction as well as web copy, corporate literature, and non-profit materials. I also edit and write for the group blog Magnificent Nose, which covers many topics but gravitates towards articles about writing and reading.

I'm also a lyricist; a guitarist for the band Baroque & Hungry; and I'm a touring cyclist.

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Apr 5	comment	What is an envelope line? Can you give us more context?
Apr 5	comment	How to avoid specifying the gender in English when the original text does not specify it? We've also gotten two flags suggesting this question should be migrated. While I think the question is fine here - a question can be on-topic on more than one site - if you think the question should be moved, you can use your close votes and specify English or ELL as a migration site.
Apr 4	comment	Strange ungooglable symbol. What does it mean? What is it called? § Perhaps this would be more on-topic at English Language & Usage or Graphic Design?
Apr 4	comment	Words in author's native language? I think this is difficult to answer without knowing details about the work in question. Can you elucidate?
Mar 28	comment	Is it worth switching to Dvorak? Relevant: Daring to Dvorak
Mar 28	comment	Is it acceptable practice to use contractions in a fictional first person narrative for children? This is certainly interesting - fascinating, actually - but I don't think it addresses the question directly.
Mar 27	comment	Effective techniques for describing pain Alternatively, in the event no pain happens conveniently to you (and I hope this this is the case), talking to others might help - friends who recently broke a bone, etc. Keep in mind that recent pain is better; memory of pain can fade.
Mar 26	comment	Curriculum Vitae editing/writing services for PhD (non-US) Questions looking for editors and reviewers are off-topic here. Perhaps asking about this on a forum would yield better results?
Mar 25	comment	How can I sell articles about TV shows online? I've edited your question to emphasize the how of your question, rather than just ask for likely sites to sell articles on. I think this will get you more answers here. Does my edit work for you? Please revert my edit if I've missed what you're looking for.
Mar 24	comment	How can I sell articles about TV shows online? Also, I'd like to point out that a very short question by a new user that contains a link to a fairly random, relatively unknown website looks pretty spammy. Looking at your questions elsewhere on the network, I suspect that this is a genuine question, but adding to the question will help avoid that appearance and help avoid having this flagged as spam by users.
Mar 24	comment	How can I sell articles about TV shows online? Welcome to Writers! Can you be more specific about what you want to do? What kind of content do you want to sell?
Mar 21	comment	Getting details of a past century right Related: How does one deal with world builder's syndrome?.
Mar 20	comment	Am i using “he/she” too often during action scenes? Agreed. Do you think there's a good balance in the text Lokiie1984 posted between proper names and pronouns?
Mar 20	comment	Tracing dependencies and emergent plotholes during edits I'd only add to this that you be careful how granular you get when deciding what elements to add to the spreadsheet (or mind map, or post-its with string on a corkboard). Pick a system - say, major events in each plot thread, etc - and stick with it. Sweat the small stuff only later, when you go through and do a cleanup after hitting the major stuff.
Mar 19	comment	How to tell or retell basic character and setting information in a series? That's my personal preference as well, and a big reason why I don't read a lot of fantasy. But there are no hard and fast rules, and it always, always depends on the story.
Mar 18	comment	Effective techniques for describing pain Perhaps there are exercises that would help in this? Maybe you can also bring this to our Tuesday writing exercise chat.
Mar 16	comment	Should I punctuate abbreviations for Old English, Middle English etc. in academic writing? Welcome to Writers! You should definitely consult whatever style guide you're using. That'd probably be MLA or APA, although there are others.
Mar 16	comment	Writing competitions Can you narrow down what you're looking for? As the question is written right now, it'll essentially generate a list to which there can be no clear best answer.
Mar 16	comment	Best way to emphasise the greenness of the fields in spring in comparison with summer "Best" is extremely subjective. Can you give more detail about what, exactly, you're trying to achieve in this description? When editing this, please be aware that questions asking what to write have been determined to be off-topic and would almost certainly be closed. However, I believe the translation aspect of this is probably fine and on-topic. Also, IMO, translation questions could be a breath of fresh air for Writers in general.
Mar 15	comment	What is the correct way to write a fractional number in a formal letter? Unfortunately, my copy of the Franklin Covey style guide agrees with this, although it's not the most recent edition. Even the Yahoo! style guide requires you write one-quarter, although it (interestingly) absolutely refuses to provide a ruling on how to write out numbers like "1 1/2". But in dialog or quoted speech, such as "five and a half" - none of these references offer guidance.