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A freelance editor, I specialize in fiction but I've worked on non-fiction as well as web copy, corporate literature, and non-profit materials. I also edit and write for the group blog Magnificent Nose, which covers many topics but gravitates towards articles about writing and reading.

I'm also a lyricist; a guitarist for the band Baroque & Hungry; and I'm a touring cyclist.


Mar
28
suggested suggested edit on What are effective ways of working with a nonfiction editor?
Mar
23
comment Why is “It was a dark and stormy night..” not a good opening?
The opening chapter of A Wrinkle in Time has events that are dependent on the weather, and it being very late (and, one can assume, dark), that set up events even further into the plot. I always thought that the line was a little silly, but the book overcomes it (and then some).
Mar
23
comment Please help me polish this paragraph.
What's the context of this paragraph? It's obviously meant to follow up something else.
Mar
22
comment Are complex sentences uncommon or unwanted in English?
It's awfully tempting to write an extended answer in one sentence, but I have nothing to say that hasn't been said well already.
Mar
16
revised Is it a good idea to write a summary of a plot before writing the full version?
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Mar
11
revised Is Mac OSX Lion's Revision Control System useable by writers?
Removed some language that was still very poll-like. Please revert if I've changed the meaning,
Mar
10
suggested suggested edit on Is Mac OSX Lion's Revision Control System useable by writers?
Mar
7
comment Is Mac OSX Lion's Revision Control System useable by writers?
There's no answerable question here. Voted to close.
Mar
6
revised How should I approach possibly unfamiliar pop culture in fiction?
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Mar
6
suggested suggested edit on How should I approach possibly unfamiliar pop culture in fiction?
Mar
5
revised Do most novels not get published?
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Mar
5
revised How long can I expect to wait between accepting an offer and signing?
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Mar
2
revised How to make travel scenes interesting without adding needless plot diversions?
added 5 characters in body
Mar
1
comment What is the preferred way to type out ellipses?
@atroon - Is this everywhere on the Mac or just in Word? If the latter, you should be able to turn that off in the Word settings. If the former, there's almost certainly a way to turn it off.
Mar
1
comment What is the preferred way to type out ellipses?
@Ralph - As an editor, I do this myself, but I always appreciate when text is a little cleaner. The more variations in the text, the more likely it is that we're going to miss one of them. That said, yes, it's our job to fix these things, but we're not machines and we're not perfect. The question is asking which way editors prefer, and this is one editor's preference; it may not be yours. :)
Feb
16
comment Verb tense for technical document titles
Added the [non-fiction] tag. At the moment, most questions on the site relate to fiction.
Feb
16
revised Verb tense for technical document titles
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Feb
9
revised Strunk and White vs “Style: The Basics of Clarity and Grace” by Williams and Colomb
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Feb
9
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Feb
8
revised How to write great movie review?
Second paragraph was irrelevant to the question.