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A freelance editor, I specialize in fiction but I've worked on non-fiction as well as web copy, corporate literature, and non-profit materials. I also edit and write for the group blog Magnificent Nose, which covers many topics but gravitates towards articles about writing and reading.

I'm also a lyricist; a guitarist for the band Baroque & Hungry; and I'm a touring cyclist.


May
10
comment Does Wiktionary supply what writers need in an online dictionary?
I know what it is. What you might want to do is make your question more specific; asking if it's a good resource is fairly general, and invites discussion and not specific answers. (Also see justsk's comment.) English is also more strict about this than Writers is.
May
10
comment Can my paragraph use better adjectives and descriptions?
@mohanitar - It' not so much a matter of verbs over adjectives, more a matter of getting rid of the words that aren't doing much.
May
9
comment Does Wiktionary supply what writers need in an online dictionary?
I voted to close and migrate to English. I suspect they'll close it or at least downvote it unless you make the question more specific. For example, a good resource for what audience? (Saying "writers", which is assumed here on Writers.SE isn't very specific.) Perhaps you could ask what Wikitionary is particularly strong at.
May
6
revised Dashes vs. Commas vs. parentheses?
edited body
May
4
answered Dashes vs. Commas vs. parentheses?
Apr
30
comment How to attract the average reader to an “intellectual” novel?
That's correct, yes.
Apr
30
comment How to attract the average reader to an “intellectual” novel?
If the bible in question were fictional scripture from a fictional world, yes, I'd change that. If it were an existing bible, I'd search out a translation that read well alongside my style. "It's the problem of the reader" -- this is a path to the reader putting the book down, eliminating their "problem". Poetic, stilted language in scripture can be a lovely thing, but the inscription quoted doesn't work on that level.
Apr
26
revised Can I ePublish my out-of-print history book?
formatting, capitalization, wording
Apr
26
suggested suggested edit on Can I ePublish my out-of-print history book?
Apr
26
answered How to attract the average reader to an “intellectual” novel?
Apr
24
revised Should the Voice of the Author change with the Point-Of-View Character in a Non-Literary Fiction?
Formatting, grammar. Also, "I" is always capitalized in English.
Apr
24
suggested suggested edit on Should the Voice of the Author change with the Point-Of-View Character in a Non-Literary Fiction?
Apr
24
comment Should the Voice of the Author change with the Point-Of-View Character in a Non-Literary Fiction?
Is the point-of-view character hanging throughout the work? Is the work entirely in first person?
Apr
24
revised Can I ePublish my out-of-print history book?
edited tags
Apr
17
comment How do I find an affordable editor?
How do I contact you?
Apr
13
revised An alternative to saying 'users' when describing features
edited tags
Apr
13
comment What is the Priority in an Action/Adventure Novel: Dialogues or Conflict?
@Robusto - Please produce a source that you have invented for these imaginary statistics. Back it up! :)
Apr
13
answered Potential confusion: referring to home planet as “Earth”
Apr
12
comment What's a clear way to simulate web text in a story?
-1 for recommending two serif typefaces on the same page; courier and times look terrible together.
Apr
12
revised Writing first programming book
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