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Apr
17
comment How to use “I think, therefore I am” in a more fluent manner?
Thanks! I thought this is a very interesting way to phrase it! +1! :)
Apr
8
comment How to use “I think, therefore I am” in a more fluent manner?
Thanks for the list of variants! +1! Just a question, will "re-experience" reads confusing since I already have another "experience" in the sentence? Also, I am little confuse by the meaning of "re-experience".
Apr
8
comment How to use “I think, therefore I am” in a more fluent manner?
@NeilFein I believe this is more of a style question. The question is that I am not sure how this phrase/idea can be incorporated into a sentence. The quote that I had is an example of how I have used it but am not happy with my style of incorporating the phrase. Thus, I am making a question here to know about other ways(or styles) of incorporating this phrase into the sentence. So, I believe I'm making more of a style rather critique question? I edited my question a little to hopefully clear up the doubt. Thanks!
Apr
1
comment Is calling this process a “convergence” accurate and clear?
These are very, very, very helpful ideas! I suddenly got so excited to rework on the concept with your ideas after getting stuck for so long! It's really great! Thank you so much!! +1!!
Apr
1
comment Is calling this process a “convergence” accurate and clear?
Thanks, you have understood it correctly.
Mar
12
comment Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner
Thanks, Patches. What you have written is beautiful and really adds life to the whole intended idea! The "story" flows really well and is nice to read too. And yes, your assumptions are correct. :)
Mar
9
comment Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it
Thanks, this is really what I needed. The sentence is so much neater and clearer this way too.
Mar
9
comment Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it
wow! Although the "story" version can hardly fit into my current paragraph, I really like the ideas you suggested. I have always wanted to learn to write with such "story" style in my works. But I lack the right phrasings to structure them to sound as dynamic as yours. And you are so right about my bad habit to write passively. I am still trying to shake off this habit. Thanks so much!
Aug
26
comment Finding words through meanings
Then what's the difference between English SE and Writing SE?