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Apr 17 |
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How to use “I think, therefore I am” in a more fluent manner? Thanks! I thought this is a very interesting way to phrase it! +1! :) |
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Apr 8 |
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How to use “I think, therefore I am” in a more fluent manner? Thanks for the list of variants! +1! Just a question, will "re-experience" reads confusing since I already have another "experience" in the sentence? Also, I am little confuse by the meaning of "re-experience". |
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Apr 8 |
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How to use “I think, therefore I am” in a more fluent manner? @NeilFein I believe this is more of a style question. The question is that I am not sure how this phrase/idea can be incorporated into a sentence. The quote that I had is an example of how I have used it but am not happy with my style of incorporating the phrase. Thus, I am making a question here to know about other ways(or styles) of incorporating this phrase into the sentence. So, I believe I'm making more of a style rather critique question? I edited my question a little to hopefully clear up the doubt. Thanks! |
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Apr 1 |
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Is calling this process a “convergence” accurate and clear? These are very, very, very helpful ideas! I suddenly got so excited to rework on the concept with your ideas after getting stuck for so long! It's really great! Thank you so much!! +1!! |
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Apr 1 |
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Is calling this process a “convergence” accurate and clear? Thanks, you have understood it correctly. |
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Mar 12 |
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Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner Thanks, Patches. What you have written is beautiful and really adds life to the whole intended idea! The "story" flows really well and is nice to read too. And yes, your assumptions are correct. :) |
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Mar 9 |
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Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it Thanks, this is really what I needed. The sentence is so much neater and clearer this way too. |
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Mar 9 |
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Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it wow! Although the "story" version can hardly fit into my current paragraph, I really like the ideas you suggested. I have always wanted to learn to write with such "story" style in my works. But I lack the right phrasings to structure them to sound as dynamic as yours. And you are so right about my bad habit to write passively. I am still trying to shake off this habit. Thanks so much! |
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Sep 14 |
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What is the other way to say “stay in touch”? Thanks for the tip! :) |
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Sep 13 |
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What is the other way to say “stay in touch”? I wanted to highlight one thing in the statement that these friends could potentially be lost if the Internet hadn't existed. But is it necessary to do this? Would the readers lead to the idea, in particular with the losing friend problem, if I had only mentioned that the Internet has helped people to retain contacts? |
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Aug 26 |
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Finding words through meanings Then what's the difference between English SE and Writing SE? |