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accepted Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner
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comment Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner
Thanks, Patches. What you have written is beautiful and really adds life to the whole intended idea! The "story" flows really well and is nice to read too. And yes, your assumptions are correct. :)
Mar
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comment Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it
Thanks, this is really what I needed. The sentence is so much neater and clearer this way too.
Mar
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comment Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it
wow! Although the "story" version can hardly fit into my current paragraph, I really like the ideas you suggested. I have always wanted to learn to write with such "story" style in my works. But I lack the right phrasings to structure them to sound as dynamic as yours. And you are so right about my bad habit to write passively. I am still trying to shake off this habit. Thanks so much!
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accepted Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it
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asked Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it
Mar
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revised Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner
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asked Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner
Feb
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accepted A friendlier way to write charges or fees to clients?
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revised A friendlier way to write charges or fees to clients?
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Feb
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asked A friendlier way to write charges or fees to clients?
Feb
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accepted How can I describe the effect of building up a mental exposures?
Feb
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asked How can I describe the effect of building up a mental exposures?
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asked What is the other way to say “stay in touch”?
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awarded  Supporter
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awarded  Scholar
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accepted Finding words through meanings
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comment Finding words through meanings
Then what's the difference between English SE and Writing SE?
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awarded  Editor
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revised Finding words through meanings
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