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Mar 12 |
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Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner Thanks, Patches. What you have written is beautiful and really adds life to the whole intended idea! The "story" flows really well and is nice to read too. And yes, your assumptions are correct. :) |
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Mar 9 |
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Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it Thanks, this is really what I needed. The sentence is so much neater and clearer this way too. |
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Mar 9 |
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Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it wow! Although the "story" version can hardly fit into my current paragraph, I really like the ideas you suggested. I have always wanted to learn to write with such "story" style in my works. But I lack the right phrasings to structure them to sound as dynamic as yours. And you are so right about my bad habit to write passively. I am still trying to shake off this habit. Thanks so much! |
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Mar 9 |
accepted | Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it |
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Mar 9 |
asked | Problems with constructing a complex sentence with many ideas in it |
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Mar 6 |
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Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner added 12 characters in body |
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Mar 6 |
asked | Describing a machine's world in a metaphorical manner |
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Feb 21 |
accepted | A friendlier way to write charges or fees to clients? |
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Feb 20 |
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A friendlier way to write charges or fees to clients? added 3 characters in body |
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Feb 20 |
asked | A friendlier way to write charges or fees to clients? |
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Feb 18 |
accepted | How can I describe the effect of building up a mental exposures? |
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Feb 16 |
asked | How can I describe the effect of building up a mental exposures? |
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Sep 14 |
accepted | What is the other way to say “stay in touch”? |
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Sep 14 |
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What is the other way to say “stay in touch”? Thanks for the tip! :) |
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Sep 13 |
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What is the other way to say “stay in touch”? I wanted to highlight one thing in the statement that these friends could potentially be lost if the Internet hadn't existed. But is it necessary to do this? Would the readers lead to the idea, in particular with the losing friend problem, if I had only mentioned that the Internet has helped people to retain contacts? |
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Sep 13 |
asked | What is the other way to say “stay in touch”? |
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Aug 27 |
awarded | Supporter |
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Aug 27 |
awarded | Scholar |
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Aug 27 |
accepted | Finding words through meanings |
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Aug 26 |
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Finding words through meanings Then what's the difference between English SE and Writing SE? |