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Those who can, do. Those who can't, write.


Apr
5
answered Using senses and similes in descriptions
Feb
23
awarded  Citizen Patrol
Feb
22
comment Writing from the middle
As a slight variation on this, you could start off with writing the key scenes first as a reference. FWIW I tend to start with them because they're what gets me excited enough to get onto my not-so-interesting lead-up scenes, then go back to the beginning and write everything from start to finish with those scenes in mind. Yes, the key scenes get rewritten in the process and they can change drastically.
Feb
22
answered Writing from the middle
Feb
6
comment Killing off a character: deciding if, when and how
+1 Let me add my signature to that petition
Feb
6
answered Killing off a character: deciding if, when and how
Feb
4
awarded  Popular Question
Jan
30
comment How do I change a novel from first person to limited third person?
Oooh, yeah, definitely not. The change in POVs happen by chapter. :)
Jan
30
comment How do I change a novel from first person to limited third person?
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I thought it was common to switch viewpoints in third person? Especially when using limited, which is pretty much the norm these days.
Jan
30
asked How do I change a novel from first person to limited third person?
Jan
2
comment Is it a bad idea to vary the voice of the narrator in third person (limited omniscient)?
I'm with Lauren on this. It sounds brilliant.
Dec
31
revised alternatives to “he said” in dialog
Added example.
Dec
31
comment alternatives to “he said” in dialog
That's true, you definitely need to mix it up. I've edited my answer with an additional example to show how you can vary it. :)
Dec
30
awarded  Enlightened
Dec
30
awarded  Nice Answer
Dec
27
answered alternatives to “he said” in dialog
Dec
20
comment Peeking through character's mask
You could consider not rescuing him. :P He may crack, but humans are pretty resilient. He could break, run away, take days (weeks, if your timeline allows) to put the facade back up, and then you'd also have a good reason for him to let it slip more often throughout the story.
Dec
20
answered Peeking through character's mask
Dec
14
comment Non-cheap ways to make villains evil?
@SF: That would be interesting, and for me the question would be why he abandons his 'noble' ideals so easily. Was he psychopathic all along and only using the ideals to draw people to him? Or did the struggle for power unhinge him in the process? Because I think that to simply drop beliefs that you have fought hard for isn't generally something we do (though I could be wrong).
Dec
14
comment Non-cheap ways to make villains evil?
@Lauren: It's definitely a YMMV thing - I would think it depends on what qualities in a person you admire the most.