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I've written a novel, The Golden Legacy (also in Spanish, La Semilla Dorada) and several screenplays.


Oct
16
comment Problems with character development?
That's interesting advice, thanks. But I guess that's not the main problem I have - it's that they sort of speak and think the same. I'll have to make some of them more irrational and impulsive :)
Oct
16
comment Problems with character development?
That makes a lot of sense, thanks!
Oct
16
comment Problems with character development?
Thanks for the editing. Sorry, I don't have anything online - and it's in Spanish to begin with :(
Oct
15
comment Problems with character development?
Done. Please let me know whether it addresses your concerns.
Oct
15
revised Problems with character development?
added 2 characters in body
Oct
15
asked Problems with character development?
Aug
27
comment Balancing loads of equally-important characters
If you have a dozen good guys, but four of them are the protagonists and the other six are more in the background, two have magically vanished! ;)
Aug
26
answered Italicizing and adding accents to Spanish words in an English novel.
Aug
22
comment How can I learn how to outline, so I can write like an architect?
+1! The Snowflake Method works for me.
Jul
2
comment Should my story's main obstacle be secret or common knowledge to the society?
FWIW, Scenario 2 is Equilibrium, more or less.
Jun
18
comment A tricky serial semi-colon
The reasons why that will never work are above my level of understanding of the style manuals (or my interest in them :) ), but in my defense, I'd argue that it matches the way you'd read it aloud.
Jun
18
answered A tricky serial semi-colon
Jun
18
answered My first act is lengthy. And I cannot shorten it. Any Suggestions?
Jun
17
awarded  Editor
Jun
17
revised Issues with Scene/Sequel model
Added "wrong scale" paragraph
Jun
17
asked Issues with Scene/Sequel model
Dec
27
awarded  Enlightened
Dec
27
awarded  Nice Answer
Nov
18
awarded  Yearling
Feb
1
awarded  Scholar