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| visits | member for | 2 years, 6 months |
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Oct 16 |
awarded | Commentator |
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Oct 16 |
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Problems with character development? That's interesting advice, thanks. But I guess that's not the main problem I have - it's that they sort of speak and think the same. I'll have to make some of them more irrational and impulsive :) |
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Oct 16 |
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Problems with character development? That makes a lot of sense, thanks! |
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Oct 16 |
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Problems with character development? Thanks for the editing. Sorry, I don't have anything online - and it's in Spanish to begin with :( |
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Oct 15 |
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Problems with character development? Done. Please let me know whether it addresses your concerns. |
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Oct 15 |
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Problems with character development? added 2 characters in body |
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Oct 15 |
asked | Problems with character development? |
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Aug 27 |
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Balancing loads of equally-important characters If you have a dozen good guys, but four of them are the protagonists and the other six are more in the background, two have magically vanished! ;) |
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Aug 26 |
answered | Italicizing and adding accents to Spanish words in an English novel. |
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Aug 22 |
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How can I learn how to outline, so I can write like an architect? +1! The Snowflake Method works for me. |
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Jul 2 |
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Should my story's main obstacle be secret or common knowledge to the society? FWIW, Scenario 2 is Equilibrium, more or less. |
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Jun 18 |
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A tricky serial semi-colon The reasons why that will never work are above my level of understanding of the style manuals (or my interest in them :) ), but in my defense, I'd argue that it matches the way you'd read it aloud. |
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Jun 18 |
answered | A tricky serial semi-colon |
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Jun 18 |
answered | My first act is lengthy. And I cannot shorten it. Any Suggestions? |
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Jun 17 |
awarded | Editor |
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Jun 17 |
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Issues with Scene/Sequel model Added "wrong scale" paragraph |
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Jun 17 |
asked | Issues with Scene/Sequel model |
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Dec 27 |
awarded | Enlightened |
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Dec 27 |
awarded | Nice Answer |
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Nov 18 |
awarded | Yearling |