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Jan
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reviewed Looks Good How-To submit manuscript online
Jan
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Jan
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reviewed Looks Good Please help me re-word this sentence
Dec
28
awarded  Custodian
Dec
28
reviewed Close Critique My Poem Please!
Dec
28
reviewed Close Punctuation-Quote or Quote-Punctuation?
Dec
28
reviewed Leave Closed Finding an Textfile Ezine to Write For
Dec
24
comment Text Editors. Suggesting & Tracking Changes to Plain-Text Documents
Since text files, by definition, don't use styling, the choices boil down to explicit tagging/markup ("NEW:.../ENDNEW" etc) or diff. Diff is built into any source-control system worth using, or you can do the low-tech version of saving multiple versions. I don't think there's a magic bullet or standard. Good luck!
Dec
5
comment How can I help a writing-phobic but competent student develop their writing?
Do you know if the student has the same anxiety about being judged when giving a verbal presentation?
Nov
1
comment How do authors incorporate languages they don't speak?
But he knows how to use Google. :-)
Sep
10
revised Habits and routines for my first tech writing job
typo, a couple minor style tweaks
Aug
27
answered How do I approach writing an autobiography?
Aug
14
comment What's the correct vocabulary for a web application tutorial?
"Select" also means to "identify" some blob of content (text on a page, files in a file browser, etc), usually as a precursor to a cut, copy, or delete operation. So I definitely wouldn't use that with a link; if I "select" a link I probably want to saves its URL to the clipboard, not to click.
Jul
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awarded  Organizer
Jul
20
revised Does a technical writer need a technical background?
fixed jargon
Jul
20
revised Writing a programming book: how to present directory structures
retag
Jul
20
answered Writing a programming book: how to present directory structures
Jun
26
comment How do you build good per-book *and* global indexes?
@XORGate, on size, imagine a doc set that would be 1500+ pages if you printed it (though most don't), not counting raw API docs (e.g. Javadoc).
Jun
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comment How does joint authorship work?
Also loosely related: writers.stackexchange.com/questions/4976/…
May
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comment How well would this beginning sell the book to readers? Not necessarily for money
On the writing, the first thing that jumped out at me was word choices, like "to joy" (did you mean "enjoy"?) and "in suits" near the beginning of the second layer. I tripped on "have a good, new and old story" -- not sure what you meant. I also tripped on "threatening her eyes teary" -- felt like there was a word missing, maybe. Stuff like that. Does that help? I know that English is maddenly hard to get the fine details of, and again I applaud you for getting this far.