| bio | website | ourportableworld.com |
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| location | St Louis, MO | |
| age | 33 | |
| visits | member for | 2 years, 1 month |
| seen | Dec 6 '12 at 3:10 | |
| stats | profile views | 3 |
I'm the geeky looking guy on the right in the picture that's married to the good looking woman on the left in the picture.
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Nov 2 |
reviewed | Reviewed Help Formatting for Kindle Direct Publishing on Mac? |
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Nov 1 |
revised |
How to find an agent for a children's picture book? Formatted link |
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Nov 1 |
awarded | Custodian |
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Nov 1 |
reviewed | Reviewed How to find an agent for a children's picture book? |
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Nov 1 |
suggested | suggested edit on How to find an agent for a children's picture book? |
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Apr 21 |
awarded | Yearling |
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Oct 21 |
awarded | Editor |
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Aug 3 |
comment |
What are examples of fiction books picked up by publishers after being self-published? +1 You beat me to the two examples that came instantly to mind. =) |
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Jul 28 |
awarded | Nice Answer |
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Jul 5 |
comment |
How can I improve this description which includes actions? Lying in the dark and counting spider webs doesn't quite seem right. It is hard enough to count spider webs in broad daylight. Perhaps "counting spider webs reflecting in the cold light of the street lamps" or something like that? That way you are providing light but it still feels dark and silent. |
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Jun 29 |
comment |
How should this ‘be going to’ be revised? I think it reads awkward but sounds fine when spoken aloud. |
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Jun 17 |
awarded | Supporter |
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Jun 15 |
comment |
How can I make a story bigger? @Ralph Gallagher makes an excellent point that I should have included. Makes me think of JRR Tolkien. He could have cut out a great deal of The Lord of the Rings just by sticking to the plot. However, the majority of his readers adore the people and places he exhaustively described more than the events. |
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Jun 15 |
awarded | Teacher |
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Jun 15 |
answered | How can I make a story bigger? |
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Apr 21 |
awarded | Autobiographer |