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Dec
9
answered Does the word 'bazaar' instead of 'market' seem more catchy?
Dec
9
revised Good idea to describe the heist place before the heist begins?
edited tags, edited title
Dec
9
asked Good idea to describe the heist place before the heist begins?
Apr
12
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Dec
3
comment Is it good style in fiction to write sentences as a flow of (disjointed) thoughts?
@JohnSmithers, thanks for the title change. I really need to learn how to frame my questions. :|
Nov
29
comment Is it good style in fiction to write sentences as a flow of (disjointed) thoughts?
@Neil, I never asked how this sentence was. I just asked whether it is a good practice to write in this style or not. But it's my bad. I should not have used that tag.
Nov
29
comment Is it good style in fiction to write sentences as a flow of (disjointed) thoughts?
Thanks Lauren. This is what most of the youth in my country like. Hence the writing style. :)
Nov
29
accepted Is it good style in fiction to write sentences as a flow of (disjointed) thoughts?
Nov
29
comment Is it good style in fiction to write sentences as a flow of (disjointed) thoughts?
@Neil, actually, this was not proofreading.
Nov
28
revised Is it good style in fiction to write sentences as a flow of (disjointed) thoughts?
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Nov
28
asked Is it good style in fiction to write sentences as a flow of (disjointed) thoughts?
Nov
17
comment How does one write a character smarter than oneself?
+1 for the quote!
Nov
15
revised Is the opening of this detective short story gripping enough to read on? Can it be shortened?
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Nov
15
answered Is the opening of this detective short story gripping enough to read on? Can it be shortened?
Sep
19
comment What is a beat?
@OneMonkey, Amazing! I'm saving this.
Sep
19
comment Software recommendations for magazine layout?
Of course I can. But I won't be able to provide the full details as I am still learning. So, goto their website or youtube 'how to use corel'. You'll get the idea.
Sep
10
answered How can I learn how to outline, so I can write like an architect?
Aug
23
comment Can a book be written without an antagonist?
@Mussri, when it comes to casual talking in english, grammar is the last thing you want to emphasize on.
Aug
7
comment Is it appropriate to credit someone with a quote if I am not absolutely sure they are the source?
I believe the complete dialogue is this: "We believe that the universe itself is conscious in a way we can never truly understand. It is engaged in a search for meaning. So it breaks itself apart, investing its own consciousness in every form of life. We are the universe trying to understand itself." It is said by a character called Delenn from the 1995 series "Babylon 5: Passing Through Gethsemane" Season 3 ep 4. But I am not sure about Carl Sagan.
Jul
7
comment Pitfalls of writing a main character of different gender to the author, specifically first-person perspective?
"because I can't relate to the nuances of the female mind." Hahahha