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| location | Europe, GMT+1 | |
| age | 34 | |
| visits | member for | 2 years, 6 months |
| seen | Jun 4 at 20:17 | |
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Apr 13 |
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Why does using this “-ing” verb construction make my writing weaker? some formatting |
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Apr 13 |
suggested | suggested edit on Why does using this “-ing” verb construction make my writing weaker? |
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Apr 13 |
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What is the Priority in an Action/Adventure Novel: Dialogues or Conflict? minor edit |
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Apr 13 |
suggested | suggested edit on What is the Priority in an Action/Adventure Novel: Dialogues or Conflict? |
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Apr 10 |
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Write a resume objective that expresses my desire to hone and sharpen my skills adding "critique" tag |
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Apr 10 |
suggested | suggested edit on Write a resume objective that expresses my desire to hone and sharpen my skills |
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Mar 29 |
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Is this sentence ambiguous? adding "critique" tag |
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Mar 29 |
suggested | suggested edit on Is this sentence ambiguous? |
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Mar 28 |
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“…and the fire from the stove engulfed him” or “jumped on him” or “covered him” or “devoured him” or what? adding "critique" tag |
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Mar 28 |
suggested | suggested edit on “…and the fire from the stove engulfed him” or “jumped on him” or “covered him” or “devoured him” or what? |
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Mar 23 |
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Are complex sentences uncommon or unwanted in English? @Jason: yeah, this answer would be so much better if it were actually correct and didn't contradict itself. |
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Mar 16 |
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Critical review of blog post adding "critique" tag, removing superfluous greeting |
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Mar 16 |
suggested | suggested edit on Critical review of blog post |
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Mar 15 |
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Asking for exam results adding "critique" tag, capitalization, padding to reach 6 chars |
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Mar 15 |
suggested | suggested edit on Asking for exam results |
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Mar 15 |
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Asking for exam results Obviously you inserted the second sentence at a later time. "If so" makes sense after "if the results were available yet", but not after "interested in knowing how well I did". Either drop the "I'm interested" sentence, or drop the if so: "I am interested in knowing how well I did. Could you let me know...". (Theoretically, you could also reword with a whether, "I am interested in knowing whether I did well. If so,..", but that doesn't quite cut it, as he is asking for the results whether or not they are good.) |
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Mar 13 |
awarded | Organizer |
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Mar 8 |
awarded | Fanatic |
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Feb 9 |
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Strunk and White vs “Style: The Basics of Clarity and Grace” by Williams and Colomb @jae: you're welcome. There's a more thorough (and less agitated) review of S&W by the same author here, but that's a PDF. |
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Feb 8 |
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Strunk and White vs “Style: The Basics of Clarity and Grace” by Williams and Colomb 50 Years of Stupid Grammar Advice |
