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May
3
asked When to start a new paragraph and when to start a new “scene”
Apr
28
asked Critique: three person dialogue
Apr
18
asked Title Choice: “The Girl [Without/Who Didn't Have] A Soul”
Apr
16
asked Is it a bad idea to have all the action in the beginning and all the dialogue in the end?
Apr
15
asked Tips for describing features of unusual place that I often visit
Apr
13
asked When to use the character's name and when to use she/he?
Apr
10
asked How to improve the ending of my short novel (mostly dialogue)?
Apr
9
asked Will this opening and dialogue grab the reader's attention? And how can I improve it?
Mar
1
asked How to improve/fix this short introductory paragraph and dialog?
Aug
7
asked Any suggestions to improve these three introductory paragraphs of a novel I'm writing (e.g. writing style, description and flow)?
Jul
17
asked Does it look unprofessional to have my name and all the titles of my website in lower-case?
Jul
6
asked Using a town to symbolize/represent a character within a story (fiction)?
Jul
4
asked How can I improve this description which includes actions?
Jun
20
asked Will the word “seek” be associated with the word “sick” if it is present in the title of my book?
Jun
4
asked It is unprofessional to use double exclamation marks and CAPS in a product or service?
May
7
asked What are some possible reasons of why my readers preferred this “writing” over the others two?
Apr
26
asked What's the best and clearer way of presenting a character description for a novel?
Apr
26
asked How many words (or lines) are long enough to make someone think about his life but short enough to hook lazy readers?
Apr
25
asked How to attract the average reader to an “intellectual” novel?
Apr
24
asked Will my readers feel like they are reading a children's storybook if there are illustrations in my novel?