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Dec
29
comment Is it a bad practice to occasionally add first-person narrative to third-person narrative?
Oh, you're right, thanks for pointing it out.
Dec
29
asked Is it a bad practice to occasionally add first-person narrative to third-person narrative?
Dec
15
accepted Is it a bad writing practice to start sentences with a verb?
Dec
14
revised Is it a bad writing practice to start sentences with a verb?
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Dec
14
asked Is it a bad writing practice to start sentences with a verb?
Nov
13
accepted How to avoid repetitive sentence structure?
Nov
11
accepted Is this dialogue and situation intriguing (short story)?
Nov
11
revised How to avoid repetitive sentence structure?
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Nov
11
asked How to avoid repetitive sentence structure?
Nov
10
comment Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
@J.R. Thanks, I think I've learned a lot from the answers to this question.
Nov
10
accepted Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
Nov
8
revised Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
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Nov
8
comment Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
@Lexi Well, I often drink beer inside 7-11 (and see many people doing it too). I think it depends on the country.
Nov
8
comment Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
Thanks! Damn, I wanted to vote up but accidentally voted down, and now I can't vote up anymore.
Nov
8
comment Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
Well, this is kind of hard. The story is also supposed to be a little bit ridiculous; he stays out the whole night, wandering around just because he forgot what his wife asked him to buy (of course it has some deeper root causes).
Nov
8
revised Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
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revised Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
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Nov
8
revised Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
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Nov
8
revised Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
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Nov
8
revised Does this opening paragraph grab your attention? (very normal setting)
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