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Jan
26
comment What work better for the following piece of writing? Past or present tense?
@Neil Fein I guess I want some sense of immediacy in the opening paragraph. I'm not sure about the rest (I haven't thought about the rest of the story). I think I don't want to use first-person since I want to hide the main character's true feelings (e.g. she's scared of getting engaged).
Jan
26
comment What work better for the following piece of writing? Past or present tense?
@Neil Fein How about now?
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Jan
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accepted Do the characters in the following dialogue sound the same?
Jan
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asked Do the characters in the following dialogue sound the same?
Jan
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revised Writing exercises to practice the art of giving unique voice to characters?
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asked Writing exercises to practice the art of giving unique voice to characters?
Jan
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asked Should I remove scenes that I myself find “boring”?
Jan
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accepted How to keep the reader engaged in a novel where “not much happens”?
Jan
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accepted Is it a bad practice to occasionally add first-person narrative to third-person narrative?
Jan
10
comment How to keep the reader engaged in a novel where “not much happens”?
@Kristof Claes Actually I started writing after reading his work. Well, In those books, many things "happen" in my opinion (e.g. Naoko dies, Sumire disappears, and Kafka has sex with his mom and 'kills' his dad). But I think I know what you mean.
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Dec
30
comment Is it a bad practice to occasionally add first-person narrative to third-person narrative?
Thanks for the feedback! (Man, writing is harder than I imagined).
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