1,611 reputation
313
bio website
location
age
visits member for 2 years, 2 months
seen yesterday
stats profile views 66

Apr
11
revised Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
deleted 33 characters in body
Apr
11
asked Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
Apr
11
comment 1st person story, but the main character will die in the end and some of the story needs to be told after his death. How to solve this problem?
@Jay But the atheist would had made the best of his life while alive. Since he knows that there's only one life, and there's nothing else after it. By the way, does the game Devil May Cry has something to do with Dante's Inferno? The protagonist's name is Dante.
Apr
9
comment 1st person story, but the main character will die in the end and some of the story needs to be told after his death. How to solve this problem?
@Lauren Ipsum It was an atheist joke: heaven and hell only exist for those who believe in them. I guess it didn't work out very well.
Apr
9
revised 1st person story, but the main character will die in the end and some of the story needs to be told after his death. How to solve this problem?
deleted 2 characters in body
Apr
9
answered 1st person story, but the main character will die in the end and some of the story needs to be told after his death. How to solve this problem?
Apr
8
comment Writing in second language
@Des Well, I'm pretty sure Spring and Winter also occurs in your country. Use the English language to write about things that happen around you.
Apr
8
awarded  Teacher
Apr
8
answered Writing in second language
Apr
8
comment Is it unusual for a flashback to have a very long dialogue?
@Outlier Thanks for spotting that!
Apr
7
asked Is it unusual for a flashback to have a very long dialogue?
Apr
5
revised Using senses and similes in descriptions
deleted 2 characters in body
Apr
5
asked Using senses and similes in descriptions
Mar
30
comment Tips for writing sentences like a native speaker
Thanks a a lot! I'll check the video.
Mar
30
revised Tips for writing sentences like a native speaker
added 2 characters in body
Mar
30
asked Tips for writing sentences like a native speaker
Mar
28
accepted Breaking the 'cooling down' rule after finishing the first draft
Mar
13
awarded  Popular Question
Mar
12
awarded  Yearling
Feb
15
accepted Is it true that men (in general) can't write female first-person?