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comment Placing similes at the beginning and at the end of a sentence
Thank for the suggestion. I updated the question.
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May
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comment Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
I finished the story (in case someone wants to read it): alexandrochen.quora.com/The-Flying-Stone
May
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accepted Is it strange if a novel starts the first chapter without one of main characters?
Apr
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accepted Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
Apr
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asked Is it strange if a novel starts the first chapter without one of main characters?
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Apr
16
comment Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
@S.F. Wow, I take it back. I'm amazed of your knowledge/logic.
Apr
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accepted Is it unusual for a flashback to have a very long dialogue?
Apr
13
comment Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
@S.F thanks I'm amazed of your knowledge on wine.
Apr
12
comment Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
@SF. Which wine will immediately tell the reader that he/she is reading a contemporary novel? (so I ca use it in the future).
Apr
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Apr
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comment Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
I added another chunk of text. I hope it's enough to expose the new mystery.
Apr
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Apr
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comment Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
Well, after the first paragraph finishes, there's a new mystery: is the stone really up in the mountain? (I guess this is more obvious later).
Apr
11
comment Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
@Jay Thanks a lot (Funny, I wrote brought up the subject in the first draft and removed up in the second).
Apr
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revised Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
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Apr
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revised Hooking the reader by omitting a piece of information
added 3 characters in body