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Oct
6
comment Am I adding too many unnecessary “actions/descriptions”?
Thanks a lot! I like the phrase action without import. I'll consider the points you made. Well, the story is about a girl who fails to feel an earthquake, so there are many themes: change, time, etc. (by the way, you meant there are grammar mistakes and oddly phrased sentences in the passage? I'm not an native English speaker so I may have missed something.)
Sep
30
comment How to format news, poems, text messages, and other kinds of written text?
@Pravesh Parekh My paragraphs are formatted as 0.25 inches. That means I have to leave the poem as 1.25?
Sep
27
comment What to do when you get stuck trying to connect sentences?
Thanks for the advice! So after 7 days and 17 coffees I realized the original was just fine.
Sep
26
comment Should I use present or past tense when the narrator talks about an universal/most-often-true statement?
Thanks for the advice. So, if I decided to not to italicize them, I should change them to past tense? (I say this because I already have italicized thoughts in the previous paragraph, and I don't want to overuse it).
Sep
26
comment Should I use present or past tense when the narrator talks about an universal/most-often-true statement?
@Mussri So you would use past tense in the passage above?
Sep
24
comment Am I overusing the words “started” and “began?”
@Kit Thanks for spotting that.
Sep
24
comment Am I overusing the words “started” and “began?”
@John Smithers Well, that's the point. I think they sound strange without them. Or is just my imagination?
Sep
13
comment Is repetition justified in the following piece?
I was following Hemingway's advice, "Write sober, edit drunk."
Sep
13
comment Is repetition justified in the following piece?
Oh you're right. Thanks for pointing that out. No more drunk editing.
Sep
11
comment Changing the way one addresses a character in a dialogue to create variation
@Joe oh I think you are confused because I didn't add italics. The original text has italics.
Sep
11
comment Changing the way one addresses a character in a dialogue to create variation
@Joe thanks I'll consider that for the next draft
Sep
9
comment Is it better to have a deadline?
@ Monica Cellio OK, done. Hope that's enough.
Sep
8
comment Ways to refers to two people who were about to marry or just married
Ha, this question passed through all the SE writing/language sites.
Aug
28
comment Tips to identify “noise” or “clutter” in your story
is there any place I can read your stories? I would like to check them out.
Aug
27
comment Tips to identify “noise” or “clutter” in your story
@Aerovistae Thanks! Murakami is my favorite author. Where did he say that? From the book "What I Talk About When I Talk about Running?"
Aug
16
comment What's a minimum recommendable word-count to generate sales in Amazon Direct Publishing (ADP)?
@Jonathan yeah, I already published it: amazon.com/dp/B00E3J3X58/ref=cm_sw_r_tw_dp_0fKdsb00PSW68 Got downloads and some reviews. Amazon is amazing!
Aug
14
comment Does this passage break the rules of telling and not showing?
@Seanny123 By the way, I read the whole story. I suggest you to start the dialogue with "Listen, I have a proposal for you..." the part before that is unnecessary (try avoiding small talk as much as possible). Or tell it instead. The phone call was a good opening try to exploit that.
Aug
12
comment Would it be annoying for the reader if the all the scenes alternate between “present” and flashback?
Thanks for the feedback. Well, the reason I'm doing this is because the flashback scenes are too many, and there isn't much going on in the "present" (just the main character wandering in his apartment). And the story begins with the call, because that's the hook.
Aug
12
comment Does a character have to define himself to be engaging?
@Seanny123 Glad I could help! By the way, don't put (or push?) your stories on github.com! Post them on scribophile.com. You'll receive invaluable feedback (talking from experience).
Aug
9
comment Writing an effective summary for a story
@Fortiter How about the edited version of the summary? (added to the question above).