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asked Is it bad idea to directly state the message/moral of a story?
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comment Is the following extended metaphor/group of metaphors too overwhelming?
Ha, I was thinking of something like that, but I couldn't make put it into the page. I'll definitely ask for your editing services once I'm done with my novel (which I've already rewritten for the third time.) Only one question: why did you use a comma between jewels and the omelet? I always thought putting different ideas in different sentences made prose clearer?
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asked Is the following extended metaphor/group of metaphors too overwhelming?
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Nov
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comment “No longer knowing” vs “without knowing…anymore.”
I've never looked at it like that. Thanks.
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accepted Writing simple short sentences first and connecting them later
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accepted Do characters sound too similar if they use the same words/expressions?
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asked “No longer knowing” vs “without knowing…anymore.”
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accepted Should I avoid “lecturing” my readers?
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comment What does/would it mean to code a novel?
@ggambett Well I agree too, I just wanted to keep the answer simple. I think designing a novel is a more accurate metaphor than coding a novel.
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accepted Can you use a company's name as title for a short story?