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Feb
9
comment Is the following passage confusing?
@NeilFein OK, I updated. Ha, but I think the surround text doesn't add much for clarity. I explained the context a bit.
Feb
9
revised Is the following passage confusing?
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Feb
9
asked Is the following passage confusing?
Feb
8
comment How can I get rid of the “things” in the following passage?
Thanks for noticing the worst. I don't know why but I always write it instead of worse.
Feb
8
asked How can I get rid of the “things” in the following passage?
Feb
4
asked Should one avoid overusing “it” in prose?
Feb
2
accepted Should write “I/he/she said” in dialogue with ambiguous action tags?
Jan
31
revised Should write “I/he/she said” in dialogue with ambiguous action tags?
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Jan
31
asked Should write “I/he/she said” in dialogue with ambiguous action tags?
Jan
30
comment I'm a new author and I have three projects with complete drafts. Which one should I focus on first?
@John Smithers I do know about rewritting. I've done it with seven stories based on the feedback of beta-readers. It just takes longer for me. Maybe because I don't plan or outline at all. I usually write the second draft from scratch.
Jan
29
revised I'm a new author and I have three projects with complete drafts. Which one should I focus on first?
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Jan
29
revised I'm a new author and I have three projects with complete drafts. Which one should I focus on first?
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Jan
29
revised I'm a new author and I have three projects with complete drafts. Which one should I focus on first?
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Jan
29
comment I'm a new author and I have three projects with complete drafts. Which one should I focus on first?
@Standback♦ Interesting option. But since all of them are first drafts, I think it'll take me like one or two years.
Jan
29
revised I'm a new author and I have three projects with complete drafts. Which one should I focus on first?
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Jan
29
asked I'm a new author and I have three projects with complete drafts. Which one should I focus on first?
Jan
25
answered Character development in a story?
Jan
23
comment I feel my protagonist is too “detached” from the main plot. What should I do?
So, as the girl looks for her place in the world as a soulless being, the protagonist is doing it also. Again I never tell this to the reader; I just throw subtle hints.
Jan
23
comment I feel my protagonist is too “detached” from the main plot. What should I do?
Thanks for you feedback. Well, he's visiting his half-sister because she asked him to. As for the reason he came looking for the girl without a soul, the truth is a mystery even for himself. However, the girl later explains to him that they are somehow "connected." A possible interpretation for this is that the girl symbolizes his own skepticism towards the existence of the soul. But I never reveal that to the reader. Not sure if that will do, though.
Jan
23
accepted Ways of presenting a metaphor/simile/analogy