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Feb
20
awarded  Notable Question
Feb
20
comment How can clarity and flow of long sentences be improved?
@PaulA.Clayton Oh, that's for spotting that. I took it from this Wikipedia entry: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keelung "From 1642 to 1661 and 1663–1668, Keelung was under Dutch control."
Feb
19
asked How can clarity and flow of long sentences be improved?
Feb
18
accepted Is it OK to add chapters to slow down the pace of the story?
Feb
17
revised Alternating names
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Feb
17
asked Alternating names
Feb
13
asked Placing a “strong” verb before a “weak” verb
Feb
13
comment Is it OK to add chapters to slow down the pace of the story?
I mainly agree. One thing I've noticed, though, is that sometimes when the pace of a story is slow the reader feels as if the story is "happening" to them. But it has to be done carefully and correctly, I think.
Feb
12
comment Is it OK to add chapters to slow down the pace of the story?
@Lauren Ipsum Oh thanks, I'll read the answers to that question. (I think Tommy went to sleep. I don't see him in the chat.)
Feb
12
revised Is it OK to add chapters to slow down the pace of the story?
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Feb
12
asked Is it OK to add chapters to slow down the pace of the story?
Feb
10
accepted Omitting pronouns and possessive adjectives in fiction
Feb
7
revised Omitting pronouns and possessive adjectives in fiction
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Feb
7
revised Omitting pronouns and possessive adjectives in fiction
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Feb
7
asked Omitting pronouns and possessive adjectives in fiction
Feb
6
comment Are the tenses of the following piece correct?
I think you missed a comma somewhere.
Feb
5
asked Are the tenses of the following piece correct?
Feb
2
comment How much repetition is too much repetition?
Once again, I'm blown away by your understanding of sentence structure. Thanks!
Jan
28
revised How to stay motivated while writing a story, after the initial burst of enthusiasm?
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Jan
28
revised How to stay motivated while writing a story, after the initial burst of enthusiasm?
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