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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Oh, I see. I thought no one in this site would read it.
Jun
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Thanks, but wait a minute, how do you know so much about the story? Ha.
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Okay, thanks Dale and Lauren for the info.
Jun
18
comment Feedback: What to use and what to ignore?
@Dale Hartley Emery I didn't do it. This is the message I see: "This question has an open bounty worth +50 reputation from Mnementh ending in 7 days." That means Mnementh opened the bounty? I don't even know what a bounty is, ha.
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
@Ville Niemi You mean something like my EDIT? Or maybe that's not enough?
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comment Is the following deus-ex-machina? If so, should I remove it?
Well, the opposite happens. She is laughed at at the animal behavior class for asking about animal suicide. That's how a member of the club (who is in the class) finds her. Do you think that works? Or it's still deux-ex-machina?
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comment I have three dead-end chapters. Should I keep them or remove them?
@Tom Au I totally forgot about that one. It's not a duplicated question, right?
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comment I have three dead-end chapters. Should I keep them or remove them?
@Dale Hartley Emery They said stuff like: "...there is no real sense of drama." "...seems to almost take a break from the plot." "...doesn't seem to be forwarding the plot much." What confuses me the most is that some readers have the opposite reaction, ha: "I like the meandering approach you've taken." "Very interesting twists in this chapter."
Jun
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comment I have three dead-end chapters. Should I keep them or remove them?
Ha, that's all right. I think I should clarify that in my question.
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comment I have three dead-end chapters. Should I keep them or remove them?
♦ Oh, well. It's not about the research all the time. For instance, in one of the chapters she encounters an "ex-lover", in another she gets fooled by a librarian, and in the last she is laughed at in class. And I reveal some stuff about her and her thoughts. Anyway, your approaches seem useful. I'll give them a thought.
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